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inFamousSlyMonkey Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2016
Wow that was hard hitting. That last page with Marion begging Sunstone. That must have been killing Ally inside.

I've got tears from the jokes and raw emotion. All parts are so well done, from art to storywriting.
jimpost Featured By Owner Edited Jun 3, 2016
This would make a great movie, it's already tailor made. 

And it would be much better than Fifty Shades of Ick.

If the movie version never comes out, I will always have this... and this is more than enough.
CatDeLaLuna Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016
first of all I'm not a native English speaker, so please don't judge on my mistakes 

this story is truly amazing .... It creeps into your soul and tracks you down into your deepest desire or pain or guilty or happiness or so on .... Into all the emotional feelings we ever been going through 
this is not just a story or pics or drawings .... It takes by your hand and all the details in the amazing drawings additional those perfect fitting words are in addition better then a movie or book 

in the end my words cannot describe it  .... So it's just a dump try to explain what I can't explain

open your soul and let it in this storie - the storie of life ... Trust love empathy humility compassion equanimity and much more should lead us to ourself and then it's in us we can freely give it away to spread love fortune luck happiness and much more

thank you SHINIEZ .... Namaste
frederik2312 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015
This is just plain awesome.
I usually am not quite into sexual comics, nor am i into BDSM, and actually i came her after seeing a picture of Ally and Lisa somewhere online. I searched for it's source and bookmarked it, just to leave it there for almost half a year.

It's strange, but it feels like this story is kinda awakening something in me. I'm not yet sure of it's nature, but i guess time will tell...
MushiMorrison Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Professional General Artist
OMG!!! Love the story, and I almost cried for Marion ;w; poor stupid thing ;w;
lightinglax1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student General Artist
This is a really amazing story. I can't stop reading.
WarpedHalo Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
-sniffle- I feel Ally's pain. 
I am loving the story (stories) here - you spin quite an engrossing tale.
Djake Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.  I just finished the chapter and… wow.  I'm a word-nerd, and words fail me.  ^^;
Twastehsquirrel Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
I don't even know what to say. I'm not into comics, I'm not into BDSM, I don't go looking for stories like this, the only reason I read the first couple pages on Chapter 1 was because I was recommended to by a friend I play video games with. Here I am though, at the end of chapter two, having read everything to this point in one sitting, and I am blown away. This is absolutely amazing, thank you!
Wime360 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I wanted to say something clever but Im speechless.
This. I. I dont even. 

Just as almost everyone else states I too came here looking for "hot steamy lesbian bdsm comic"... and on the one hand got exactly that, and on the other a very, very deep story with a huge... educational aspect, that I'm finding extremely valuable... maybe because my gf is slowly opening up and showing her sub side to me, and this piece of art right here gives me a completely different point of view at everything related...
It looks nice, it reads nice, it's full of wisdom and also some puns,  well... it's all good! 
I can't find a single thing that is wrong with this! wow!
Thank you!
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