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Twastehsquirrel Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
I don't even know what to say. I'm not into comics, I'm not into BDSM, I don't go looking for stories like this, the only reason I read the first couple pages on Chapter 1 was because I was recommended to by a friend I play video games with. Here I am though, at the end of chapter two, having read everything to this point in one sitting, and I am blown away. This is absolutely amazing, thank you!
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Wime360 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wanted to say something clever but Im speechless.
This. I. I dont even. 

Just as almost everyone else states I too came here looking for "hot steamy lesbian bdsm comic"... and on the one hand got exactly that, and on the other a very, very deep story with a huge... educational aspect, that I'm finding extremely valuable... maybe because my gf is slowly opening up and showing her sub side to me, and this piece of art right here gives me a completely different point of view at everything related...
It looks nice, it reads nice, it's full of wisdom and also some puns,  well... it's all good! 
I can't find a single thing that is wrong with this! wow!
Thank you!
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oldmurph Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
holy cow!  just dashed through both chapters.  found you through your impressive artwork. started reading for th 'obvious' reasons, but honestly did not expect such an expressive storyline, nor th tear-jerker.  very, very impressed, on all topics. 
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Twastehsquirrel Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
I'm glad I'm not the only one who was shaken up a bit xD
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ylwolfy Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
I knew what she was going to say, I expected it. Yet when she said it, it hit me like a brick to the face, I instantly teared up. VERY emotional and sad. I came here for pretty drawings of beautiful girls and I got hooked on the amazing story.
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mr-droy Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
love the gang
got dramatic at the end there real dramatic
:)
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Knowledgeseeker Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
I don't like BDSM. It doesn't do anything for me.

I fucking LOVE this story. I'm addicted.
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Morthei Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
I might be remembering incorrectly, but didn't there used to be a panel that showed Alan talking to the police about Marion's situation?  I mean, all the text seems to be there, but I could swear there were images that aren't there now after the re-fitting.
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shiniez Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
no,  it is just mentioned. that particular bit of past will be handled in great detail in chapter 8
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SunofKyuss Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
badass. I know very little of this world and your blowing my mind with this story. I'm learning a whole new understanding for s&m. The sensual side as well as the how dangerous it can be. Also, how important it is to take it slow. I was on the edge of my seat over Ally's problem.  Very educational as well as entertaining. I hope that's what you where trying to achieve? Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks Shiniez!
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