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April 21, 2012
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(Contains: sexual themes)
what , you didnt know im a bit of a douchebag?...now off to think up an even more ominous name for the next one, muahahahahahhahahahahahahahah, cough
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SorenMaelstrom Featured By Owner 6 hours ago
This story is great!
I am not even into S&M and this is a great story! Although the many Grammar Errors show the hard enthusiasm of the writing.

I know this feeling. It feels like electricity in the spine and the Fingertips are feeling like they cry out to write faster. The fingertips cry like in agony that they are not able to send the words as electric current into the Keyboard to imbue every single letter with the emotions you are feeling at every moment you work at this Story.

But... Someone should check the words... No one who would "think this would sound better at this point" or "suggest you to rewrite that text bubble". Look for someone who helps you to find errors in the words, not someone who edits you. I know how hard it is to check for errors in your own work... Very hard if you put so much Soul in a story. So it must be one who you would trust with this, otherwise it would feel like someone cuts around in parts of you.

Hope you find someone... or you can bear to check it yourself... I wish you the best of luck for it. You deserve it, and much more. :)
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psicotica-posey Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Ok it took me a while to actually read the story... and it's great! So bad i waited 2 years to read it. Can' wait for chapter 2!
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shiniez Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Professional Digital Artist
chapter 2, and 3 are done and posted here already, chapter 4 almost done

just go to my gallery and look left there are folders :)
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FayteZephyr Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
I gave you one chapter to win me over to your series... and you succeeded. Good job xD :)
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NamelessObsidian22 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
this is PERFECT! I love how every panel is fluidly sequence and over-the-top choice of colour palette. This is the first comic that I have ever read through NON-STOP! I gonna read the next chapter tomorrow and see how everything unfolds.
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Caine001 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This would make a kick-ass graphic novel! Unless it already is. Is it on sale at Amazon by any chance and under what name?:D (Big Grin) 
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dazuzu Featured By Owner Edited Aug 30, 2014  New member
This has been the best thing I have read all month. I mean this was...is there a word that is a combination of amazing, witty, and pervertedly romantic. If there is that is what encompasses what I felt reading this. You need to continue writing such great and creative stories. I'm so sad its done for now. I anxiously await further chapters. 
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JLAtheScifiGuy Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  New member
This.. was absolutely amazing. 
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boom17 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
make sure you get me a signed copy when you finally get this published, cause this is beyond Gold, this is frikkin PLATINUM!!!.... ;)
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Djake Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dear dA,
Please make it possible to :+fav: a whole gallery.  There's this absolutely fabulous sequential tale about a lesbian couple exploring their desires for dominance and submission and…  no, wait…  it's not what you think!
>sigh<
-Djake
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