This story is great! I am not even into S&M and this is a great story! Although the many Grammar Errors show the hard enthusiasm of the writing.
I know this feeling. It feels like electricity in the spine and the Fingertips are feeling like they cry out to write faster. The fingertips cry like in agony that they are not able to send the words as electric current into the Keyboard to imbue every single letter with the emotions you are feeling at every moment you work at this Story.
But... Someone should check the words... No one who would "think this would sound better at this point" or "suggest you to rewrite that text bubble". Look for someone who helps you to find errors in the words, not someone who edits you. I know how hard it is to check for errors in your own work... Very hard if you put so much Soul in a story. So it must be one who you would trust with this, otherwise it would feel like someone cuts around in parts of you.
Hope you find someone... or you can bear to check it yourself... I wish you the best of luck for it. You deserve it, and much more.
this is PERFECT! I love how every panel is fluidly sequence and over-the-top choice of colour palette. This is the first comic that I have ever read through NON-STOP! I gonna read the next chapter tomorrow and see how everything unfolds.
This has been the best thing I have read all month. I mean this was...is there a word that is a combination of amazing, witty, and pervertedly romantic. If there is that is what encompasses what I felt reading this. You need to continue writing such great and creative stories. I'm so sad its done for now. I anxiously await further chapters.