You are SOOOO much better that "Fifty Shades of Gray", and a talented artist to boot. You do an excellent job examining the true emotions of the characters, then you add excellent art work to it. This is one of the most EROTIC works I have seen in a long time. I'm getting in to writing myself but your artwork makes YOUR writing come to life. Please keep this up. You do FANTASTIC work. Do you have a e-mail for contact, realizing of course the need to keep sickos away? If you do, please post it. Best of Luck!
dude you are right fifty shades has got nothing but a moive hmmmmmmm sunstone as a movie...... i shure as Sh#@ would want to see that, but would probly be bastardized beyond reconition by the movie industry. (soulless movie corporation a-holes)
50 shades is a mockey of the BDSM world, it's crap and the community hates the way it portrays the lifestyle. I love this comic and can't wait to read the next chapter. I will admit though thinking about how much of a crappy read this would be, but it surprised me big time
This story is great! I am not even into S&M and this is a great story! Although the many Grammar Errors show the hard enthusiasm of the writing.
I know this feeling. It feels like electricity in the spine and the Fingertips are feeling like they cry out to write faster. The fingertips cry like in agony that they are not able to send the words as electric current into the Keyboard to imbue every single letter with the emotions you are feeling at every moment you work at this Story.
But... Someone should check the words... No one who would "think this would sound better at this point" or "suggest you to rewrite that text bubble". Look for someone who helps you to find errors in the words, not someone who edits you. I know how hard it is to check for errors in your own work... Very hard if you put so much Soul in a story. So it must be one who you would trust with this, otherwise it would feel like someone cuts around in parts of you.
Hope you find someone... or you can bear to check it yourself... I wish you the best of luck for it. You deserve it, and much more.