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April 21, 2012
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(Contains: sexual themes)
what , you didnt know im a bit of a douchebag? off to think up an even more ominous name for the next one, muahahahahahhahahahahahahahah, cough
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logrider Featured By Owner 22 hours ago
Really great stuff, especially the art work which is magnificent.  
SFGreen Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
A very good chapter! Love your style C:
tokyodude19 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Too good
000RainbowChick000 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, just finished reading this first chapter, am in love - THANK YOU for the - so far- cute and well drawn story, I LOVE Ally, Alan is Amazing and Lisa is so cute, thaaaank you again <3
flamewolf393 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Wow, I love the color scheme here soooo much. Really well done.
RhSArtifex Featured By Owner May 31, 2014

I've gotta admit I was ensnared by the story, at first I thought it'd be something very long drawn out story about a meeting between two people,

but as the story progressed on the sophistication of the conversations and the characters interaction between themselves rose steadily to a very
good level - the fact that it was a dom/sub relation between two women helped too (I'm a guy after all *ggg*).

I realize that it's sometimes quite hard to understand the concept and ideology involved with BDSM, but you manage to bring it across very maturely
and very understandable. Kudos to you, sir, and keep on rocking the story with the awesome artwork and character development.

Although inquiring minds wonder if this is a story about recapitulating the life experiences of the narrator - who is Lisa after all - after losing Ally?

Looking forwards to the continuation  of the series. :)
miniquinn Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
arghgg best shit ever. If you ever make a book I will buy the shit out of it. Onto the next chapter haha
emmafrostuk Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I enjoyed this strip so much. Beautifully drawn. Love the angst. Love that you gave the "ladies" some privacy for the nitty-gritty bits. Liked the humor that broke up the intensity. Really well paced. Just excellent. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Vcomics1 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
nice story everything was so cool and the art is just amazing! im going for chapter 2!!
NodinLen Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Wow. You are the first writer to really capture the sub dom dynamic. This reminds me so much of when I met my wife aka sub. I showed this to her and she feels the same way. Also your art work is absolutely amazing. I felt exactly like Ally did when I was getting ready to meet my sub for the first time. Just because we are doms does not mean we always have it together. Moving on to chapter two.
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