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what , you didnt know im a bit of a douchebag?...now off to think up an even more ominous name for the next one, muahahahahahhahahahahahahahah, cough
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sophhiee Featured By Owner May 14, 2016
This comic is so amazingly beautiful, insightful and fun. Really enjoying it. 
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Angel-0f-The-Night Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
This has become my favorite comic. Thank you for making it. 
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my-lullaby123 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2016  Student Artist
Perfect coloring... shading... contrast... You are truly a talented amazing artist and writer
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cblakeley Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
That is EXACTLY the kind of kink I want! God damn this is hot and sweet and amazing and I have the rest of your archives to go through. SWEET!
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FacadeSmiles Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful.
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onepiece97011 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016
Amazing! 
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FelixSerpus Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016
This is quite amazing...
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gilles-maisonneuve Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016
This is awesome !
Subtle storyline, wonderful drawings. Text and drawings in perfect complementarity.
You *are* an author!

Please go on with this story. I'm starving for the continuation.
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Bevillia Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015
Well, referred here from an Imgur Post, and I must say I really enjoy this so far. It's a fine balancing line between 'smut' and 'plot', and I think you've hit it right on the mark.

Making my way through the chapters, and I look forward to reading the next few as they come.

Keep up the awesome work
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Shadegear Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015
Just read through all of chapter one, will read the rest later.
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Victoriafox2 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015
IT WAS SO WONDERFUL!!!! You are a great artist keep up the great work <3 <3 <3
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Sillhid Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2015
Wooow...
I experienced something like that, and even married my submissive.
And damn, the author of this story knows what he is talking about!

P.S.Sorry for the English, I'm from Russia.
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hornyrj Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2015
That was... That was... Beautiful!
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Living-Room-King Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now this was something really really cool to read :)
Thank you honestly; this was sooooo refreshing. There are a lot of lesbian BDSM comics out there, but yours is definitely amazin'. Ally and Lisa are so human (and I love Alan :D). They are not sex-craving beasts, they ask themselves questions about their situation - a situation which could happen IRL. This was wow. Thank you!




(Chapter 2, here I come) 
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FlashD81 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015
It's funny... I have read through all the pages 2-3 times now, own all of the books (3 as of this post), and I still can't get enough of this story. I don't know why either (it's also 3 AM) but I love looking though all of this stuff. 

It might be because I'm thinking of my own little piece of fiction and works such as this are a good inspiration. Whatever the reason, I thank you Shiniez, for keeping with it and making it a world of characters want to know more about.
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eriklzbr Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
Woah call me crazy but I think I can understand how Ally feels... sometimes I feel so bored and lonely that even my house looks like a castle... Btw this comic is actually good! Honestly I didn't expect reading a lesbian BDSM comic because of the story :'D The characters are so human, and some moments are like "hey, I could be in that situation too". Really nice job!
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shiniez Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
keep reading :) gets better 
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cbhwewceb Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015
I saw "The End" and I was a like "NOOOOOOOO!q!!!!" and then I saw "of chapter" and I was all like "Phew!".  I absolutely love this and I can't wait to read more!
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MortusVanDerHell Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What does this mean: "the end" ? Your Story is pretty cool ! Please continue. :-D
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cbhwewceb Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015
Scroll down a bit, it says "The End...(of Chapter)"
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atinverde Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015
this is true BDSM. and I love the conflicted feelings both have. you are a great writer, keep it up!
P.S. You have only made me want to try this even more dammit
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cbhwewceb Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015
IKR, Lisa is basically living out the fantasy I've had since I was like 15!
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0mniessence Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
awww, you wrote and drew this very well :3 Thank you for this entertaining piece. Trust me, if I could, I would support you by buying your material, but I'm not at the age where I can buy these things without my parents noticing :(

Maybe in 5 years... Thank you once again. Please continue working on this masterpiece till then :3
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Not-Quite-Lilac Featured By Owner May 16, 2015
I'm really enjoying this so far.
Thanks.
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Lezk777 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
omg dude, I love this! that "the end" scared me for a sec xD
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lorenaah Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015
Great work! Excuse me while I go over there worship you La la la la 
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Lezk777 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
lol ikr!
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Highly disappointed when I clicked the next button and nothing happend. Then I found the next chapter and all was good again. Thank you for a unique, beautiful comic, with characters I can't help but root for. 
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pjacob430 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
i know a lot of people tell you about how good this comic is and what not but i would like to say it myself. i love the artwork and the way its written. i also love how you make s/m not seem violent and sadistic. before this the only experience I had with s/m was Google image searches and i love the different outlook you're comic gives me. thank you for sharing this enlightening story with me.  
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n8water Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
wonderful last scene
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RoyceGrey Featured By Owner Edited Dec 15, 2014
Nice composition at the end there.

Also, I guess that's a good thing about this kind of relationship.  The Sub doesn't necessarily mind if the Dom calls out of the blue.
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EmsanQ Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 That last panel is just amazing.
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mlmiller Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
You are SOOOO much better that "Fifty Shades of Gray", and a talented artist to boot. You do an excellent job examining the true emotions of the characters, then you add excellent art work to it. This is one of the most EROTIC works I have seen in a long time. I'm getting in to writing myself but your artwork makes YOUR writing come to life. Please keep this up. You do FANTASTIC work. Do you have a e-mail for contact, realizing of course the need to keep sickos away? If you do, please post it. Best of Luck! 
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most-awesome-maker Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
dude you are right fifty shades has got nothing but a moive hmmmmmmm
sunstone as a movie...... i shure as Sh#@ would want to see that, but would probly be bastardized beyond reconition by the movie industry. (soulless movie corporation a-holes)
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KuroYukai Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
50 shades is a mockey of the BDSM world, it's crap and the community hates the way it portrays the lifestyle. I love this comic and can't wait to read the next chapter. I will admit though thinking about how much of a crappy read this would be, but it surprised me big time
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JTM93 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is why you get Animators and Script Writers like me to make it for a Animated Net Movie.

NOTE: The Script Writer I am referring to is someone who writes out the animation scripts.
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Nic-Naire Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
very great i can't wait for more to come I truly enjoyed reading this. Show people BDSM is not a bad thing some of us just like it rough lol.
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SorenMaelstrom Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
This story is great!
I am not even into S&M and this is a great story! Although the many Grammar Errors show the hard enthusiasm of the writing.

I know this feeling. It feels like electricity in the spine and the Fingertips are feeling like they cry out to write faster. The fingertips cry like in agony that they are not able to send the words as electric current into the Keyboard to imbue every single letter with the emotions you are feeling at every moment you work at this Story.

But... Someone should check the words... No one who would "think this would sound better at this point" or "suggest you to rewrite that text bubble". Look for someone who helps you to find errors in the words, not someone who edits you. I know how hard it is to check for errors in your own work... Very hard if you put so much Soul in a story. So it must be one who you would trust with this, otherwise it would feel like someone cuts around in parts of you.

Hope you find someone... or you can bear to check it yourself... I wish you the best of luck for it. You deserve it, and much more. :)
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psicotica-posey Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
Ok it took me a while to actually read the story... and it's great! So bad i waited 2 years to read it. Can' wait for chapter 2!
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shiniez Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
chapter 2, and 3 are done and posted here already, chapter 4 almost done

just go to my gallery and look left there are folders :)
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FayteZephyr Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
I gave you one chapter to win me over to your series... and you succeeded. Good job xD :)
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NamelessObsidian22 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
this is PERFECT! I love how every panel is fluidly sequence and over-the-top choice of colour palette. This is the first comic that I have ever read through NON-STOP! I gonna read the next chapter tomorrow and see how everything unfolds.
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Caine001 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This would make a kick-ass graphic novel! Unless it already is. Is it on sale at Amazon by any chance and under what name?:D (Big Grin) 
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dazuzu Featured By Owner Edited Aug 30, 2014
This has been the best thing I have read all month. I mean this was...is there a word that is a combination of amazing, witty, and pervertedly romantic. If there is that is what encompasses what I felt reading this. You need to continue writing such great and creative stories. I'm so sad its done for now. I anxiously await further chapters. 
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JLAtheScifiGuy Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
This.. was absolutely amazing. 
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boom17 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
make sure you get me a signed copy when you finally get this published, cause this is beyond Gold, this is frikkin PLATINUM!!!.... ;)
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Djake Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dear dA,
Please make it possible to :+fav: a whole gallery.  There's this absolutely fabulous sequential tale about a lesbian couple exploring their desires for dominance and submission and…  no, wait…  it's not what you think!
>sigh<
-Djake
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Bonbon88 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why can I not upvote this? *tries to anyway*
Eh whatever, take a llama bro.
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logrider Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Really great stuff, especially the art work which is magnificent.  
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SFGreen Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
A very good chapter! Love your style C:
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