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what , you didnt know im a bit of a douchebag? off to think up an even more ominous name for the next one, muahahahahahhahahahahahahahah, cough
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BrotherStephen Featured By Owner Edited 4 days ago
Highly disappointed when I clicked the next button and nothing happend. Then I found the next chapter and all was good again. Thank you for a unique, beautiful comic, with characters I can't help but root for. 
pjacob430 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  New member
i know a lot of people tell you about how good this comic is and what not but i would like to say it myself. i love the artwork and the way its written. i also love how you make s/m not seem violent and sadistic. before this the only experience I had with s/m was Google image searches and i love the different outlook you're comic gives me. thank you for sharing this enlightening story with me.  
n8water Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  New member
wonderful last scene
RoyceGrey Featured By Owner Edited Dec 15, 2014
Nice composition at the end there.

Also, I guess that's a good thing about this kind of relationship.  The Sub doesn't necessarily mind if the Dom calls out of the blue.
EmsanQ Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 That last panel is just amazing.
mlmiller Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
You are SOOOO much better that "Fifty Shades of Gray", and a talented artist to boot. You do an excellent job examining the true emotions of the characters, then you add excellent art work to it. This is one of the most EROTIC works I have seen in a long time. I'm getting in to writing myself but your artwork makes YOUR writing come to life. Please keep this up. You do FANTASTIC work. Do you have a e-mail for contact, realizing of course the need to keep sickos away? If you do, please post it. Best of Luck! 
most-awesome-maker Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
dude you are right fifty shades has got nothing but a moive hmmmmmmm
sunstone as a movie...... i shure as Sh#@ would want to see that, but would probly be bastardized beyond reconition by the movie industry. (soulless movie corporation a-holes)
KuroYukai Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
50 shades is a mockey of the BDSM world, it's crap and the community hates the way it portrays the lifestyle. I love this comic and can't wait to read the next chapter. I will admit though thinking about how much of a crappy read this would be, but it surprised me big time
JTM93 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is why you get Animators and Script Writers like me to make it for a Animated Net Movie.

NOTE: The Script Writer I am referring to is someone who writes out the animation scripts.
Nic-Naire Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
very great i can't wait for more to come I truly enjoyed reading this. Show people BDSM is not a bad thing some of us just like it rough lol.
SorenMaelstrom Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
This story is great!
I am not even into S&M and this is a great story! Although the many Grammar Errors show the hard enthusiasm of the writing.

I know this feeling. It feels like electricity in the spine and the Fingertips are feeling like they cry out to write faster. The fingertips cry like in agony that they are not able to send the words as electric current into the Keyboard to imbue every single letter with the emotions you are feeling at every moment you work at this Story.

But... Someone should check the words... No one who would "think this would sound better at this point" or "suggest you to rewrite that text bubble". Look for someone who helps you to find errors in the words, not someone who edits you. I know how hard it is to check for errors in your own work... Very hard if you put so much Soul in a story. So it must be one who you would trust with this, otherwise it would feel like someone cuts around in parts of you.

Hope you find someone... or you can bear to check it yourself... I wish you the best of luck for it. You deserve it, and much more. :)
psicotica-posey Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
Ok it took me a while to actually read the story... and it's great! So bad i waited 2 years to read it. Can' wait for chapter 2!
shiniez Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
chapter 2, and 3 are done and posted here already, chapter 4 almost done

just go to my gallery and look left there are folders :)
FayteZephyr Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
I gave you one chapter to win me over to your series... and you succeeded. Good job xD :)
NamelessObsidian22 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
this is PERFECT! I love how every panel is fluidly sequence and over-the-top choice of colour palette. This is the first comic that I have ever read through NON-STOP! I gonna read the next chapter tomorrow and see how everything unfolds.
Caine001 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This would make a kick-ass graphic novel! Unless it already is. Is it on sale at Amazon by any chance and under what name?:D (Big Grin) 
dazuzu Featured By Owner Edited Aug 30, 2014
This has been the best thing I have read all month. I mean this there a word that is a combination of amazing, witty, and pervertedly romantic. If there is that is what encompasses what I felt reading this. You need to continue writing such great and creative stories. I'm so sad its done for now. I anxiously await further chapters. 
JLAtheScifiGuy Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
This.. was absolutely amazing. 
boom17 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
make sure you get me a signed copy when you finally get this published, cause this is beyond Gold, this is frikkin PLATINUM!!!.... ;)
Djake Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dear dA,
Please make it possible to :+fav: a whole gallery.  There's this absolutely fabulous sequential tale about a lesbian couple exploring their desires for dominance and submission and…  no, wait…  it's not what you think!
Bonbon88 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Why can I not upvote this? *tries to anyway*
Eh whatever, take a llama bro.
logrider Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Really great stuff, especially the art work which is magnificent.  
SFGreen Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
A very good chapter! Love your style C:
tokyodude19 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Too good
000RainbowChick000 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, just finished reading this first chapter, am in love - THANK YOU for the - so far- cute and well drawn story, I LOVE Ally, Alan is Amazing and Lisa is so cute, thaaaank you again <3
flamewolf393 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Wow, I love the color scheme here soooo much. Really well done.
RhSArtifex Featured By Owner May 31, 2014

I've gotta admit I was ensnared by the story, at first I thought it'd be something very long drawn out story about a meeting between two people,

but as the story progressed on the sophistication of the conversations and the characters interaction between themselves rose steadily to a very
good level - the fact that it was a dom/sub relation between two women helped too (I'm a guy after all *ggg*).

I realize that it's sometimes quite hard to understand the concept and ideology involved with BDSM, but you manage to bring it across very maturely
and very understandable. Kudos to you, sir, and keep on rocking the story with the awesome artwork and character development.

Although inquiring minds wonder if this is a story about recapitulating the life experiences of the narrator - who is Lisa after all - after losing Ally?

Looking forwards to the continuation  of the series. :)
miniquinn Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
arghgg best shit ever. If you ever make a book I will buy the shit out of it. Onto the next chapter haha
emmafrostuk Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I enjoyed this strip so much. Beautifully drawn. Love the angst. Love that you gave the "ladies" some privacy for the nitty-gritty bits. Liked the humor that broke up the intensity. Really well paced. Just excellent. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Vcomics1 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
nice story everything was so cool and the art is just amazing! im going for chapter 2!!
NodinLen Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Wow. You are the first writer to really capture the sub dom dynamic. This reminds me so much of when I met my wife aka sub. I showed this to her and she feels the same way. Also your art work is absolutely amazing. I felt exactly like Ally did when I was getting ready to meet my sub for the first time. Just because we are doms does not mean we always have it together. Moving on to chapter two.
RemedyX5 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Photographer
I want More!!!!
florkimi Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Love it!! I want to read chapter 2 now!! :D
shiniez Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
what's stopping you? XD
florkimi Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Actually, my computer's battery it's stopping me XD there's something wrong with it... :P 
 I should throw this piece of junk away jaja
 Really cool you made an S&M Lesbian comic, I nedeed to read/see some of that :)
 Where are you from?? I'm from Argentina.
D339F2057 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
reread the chapter ... I just love this pair they are so perfect together =D I often don't like when the story doesn't have any action/twist but I guess here the sexy/cute/fun replaces it perfectly
keep up the good work
Vampireguardian Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Just read through this chapter today......I'm quite speechless and amazed. It's so sexy and yet cute and awkward and I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE Thankfully there is more to read! :D I love this, I had no idea how much I needed something like this. It is so hard to find good s/m lesbian stories.
BeauBeaucoup Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Gosh... why is this so good.
BluTiger07 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
I thoroughly enjoyed chapter one! This one splendid!!! Thank you!
The-BenT-One Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Professional General Artist
I just read though this entire chapter in one sitting. Masterfully done. It's rare to see something that is simultaneously about sex and not about it at the same time. I've been seeing these pages on and off on the site and I have to say I don't know why I never read them before. You have yourself a new fan.
Llacheu Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
This is absolutely on another level. *applauds wildly*
swordofthorns Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
This comic is soo hot while at the very same time being full of heart. It really is hard getting into the role when one player is in and the other half asses it or just doesn't care. On the other hand there's a certain kind of magic when two people step into their inner selves and play out what they find there. I can't wait to read the rest of this!!!

Great story, but seriously... cliffhanger much?
FlyingRagePanda Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
B-Rosso Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That was great, the whole first chapter. it is exciting how much i want to read more. Magnificent!
tracymai Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
This was possibly the greatest love story I've ever seen in a comic.  Holy crap!
luaneko Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
At least the first good BDSM love story I've ever read.
inlocoparentis Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
Fantastic story!
Thanks for creating this.
Aznsiegler Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Noooo! It ended! Let me finally take this moment to say that this is a wonderful story, brilliantly put together, and breathtakingly inspiring. It's love in raw form, the part of us that no one wants to admit to, but lurks in all of our closets. I love it.
kittyball Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
VERY COOL story!! (more the Real then a story)
FlyingRagePanda Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What Kitty said. ^^^ I <3 real.
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