You are SOOOO much better that "Fifty Shades of Gray", and a talented artist to boot. You do an excellent job examining the true emotions of the characters, then you add excellent art work to it. This is one of the most EROTIC works I have seen in a long time. I'm getting in to writing myself but your artwork makes YOUR writing come to life. Please keep this up. You do FANTASTIC work. Do you have a e-mail for contact, realizing of course the need to keep sickos away? If you do, please post it. Best of Luck!
dude you are right fifty shades has got nothing but a moive hmmmmmmm sunstone as a movie...... i shure as Sh#@ would want to see that, but would probly be bastardized beyond reconition by the movie industry. (soulless movie corporation a-holes)
50 shades is a mockey of the BDSM world, it's crap and the community hates the way it portrays the lifestyle. I love this comic and can't wait to read the next chapter. I will admit though thinking about how much of a crappy read this would be, but it surprised me big time
This story is great! I am not even into S&M and this is a great story! Although the many Grammar Errors show the hard enthusiasm of the writing.
I know this feeling. It feels like electricity in the spine and the Fingertips are feeling like they cry out to write faster. The fingertips cry like in agony that they are not able to send the words as electric current into the Keyboard to imbue every single letter with the emotions you are feeling at every moment you work at this Story.
But... Someone should check the words... No one who would "think this would sound better at this point" or "suggest you to rewrite that text bubble". Look for someone who helps you to find errors in the words, not someone who edits you. I know how hard it is to check for errors in your own work... Very hard if you put so much Soul in a story. So it must be one who you would trust with this, otherwise it would feel like someone cuts around in parts of you.
Hope you find someone... or you can bear to check it yourself... I wish you the best of luck for it. You deserve it, and much more.
this is PERFECT! I love how every panel is fluidly sequence and over-the-top choice of colour palette. This is the first comic that I have ever read through NON-STOP! I gonna read the next chapter tomorrow and see how everything unfolds.
This has been the best thing I have read all month. I mean this was...is there a word that is a combination of amazing, witty, and pervertedly romantic. If there is that is what encompasses what I felt reading this. You need to continue writing such great and creative stories. I'm so sad its done for now. I anxiously await further chapters.
Dear dA, Please make it possible to a whole gallery. There's this absolutely fabulous sequential tale about a lesbian couple exploring their desires for dominance and submission and… no, wait… it's not what you think! >sigh< -Djake
I've gotta admit I was ensnared by the story, at first I thought it'd be something very long drawn out story about a meeting between two people,
but as the story progressed on the sophistication of the conversations and the characters interaction between themselves rose steadily to a very good level - the fact that it was a dom/sub relation between two women helped too (I'm a guy after all *ggg*).
I realize that it's sometimes quite hard to understand the concept and ideology involved with BDSM, but you manage to bring it across very maturely and very understandable. Kudos to you, sir, and keep on rocking the story with the awesome artwork and character development.
Although inquiring minds wonder if this is a story about recapitulating the life experiences of the narrator - who is Lisa after all - after losing Ally?
Looking forwards to the continuation of the series.
I enjoyed this strip so much. Beautifully drawn. Love the angst. Love that you gave the "ladies" some privacy for the nitty-gritty bits. Liked the humor that broke up the intensity. Really well paced. Just excellent. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Wow. You are the first writer to really capture the sub dom dynamic. This reminds me so much of when I met my wife aka sub. I showed this to her and she feels the same way. Also your art work is absolutely amazing. I felt exactly like Ally did when I was getting ready to meet my sub for the first time. Just because we are doms does not mean we always have it together. Moving on to chapter two.
Actually, my computer's battery it's stopping me XD there's something wrong with it... I should throw this piece of junk away jaja Really cool you made an S&M Lesbian comic, I nedeed to read/see some of that Where are you from?? I'm from Argentina.
reread the chapter ... I just love this pair they are so perfect together I often don't like when the story doesn't have any action/twist but I guess here the sexy/cute/fun replaces it perfectly keep up the good work
Just read through this chapter today......I'm quite speechless and amazed. It's so sexy and yet cute and awkward and I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE Thankfully there is more to read! I love this, I had no idea how much I needed something like this. It is so hard to find good s/m lesbian stories.
I just read though this entire chapter in one sitting. Masterfully done. It's rare to see something that is simultaneously about sex and not about it at the same time. I've been seeing these pages on and off on the site and I have to say I don't know why I never read them before. You have yourself a new fan.
This comic is soo hot while at the very same time being full of heart. It really is hard getting into the role when one player is in and the other half asses it or just doesn't care. On the other hand there's a certain kind of magic when two people step into their inner selves and play out what they find there. I can't wait to read the rest of this!!!
Noooo! It ended! Let me finally take this moment to say that this is a wonderful story, brilliantly put together, and breathtakingly inspiring. It's love in raw form, the part of us that no one wants to admit to, but lurks in all of our closets. I love it.