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:iconwickedprince:
WickedPrince Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017
I was gonna say that's the wrong way around, but then I got the metaphor in the picture. :)
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:iconminionofsolitude:
MinionofSolitude Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2016
First, before I forget, Everyone notice Allison's copyright infringement???  She's doing the `Patented Lisa Lip bite`!!!
That makes as ALL swoon!!  But, to be fair, she Still doesn't have it Quite right.... Yep, Lisa does it better!!  Yeah, she does };-)
So, I'm doing this here, well because, look at the image...  On top of the Stunning visuals with your written dialogue, part of the overall backstory for these ladies is that Lisa is a writer whose words drew Allison in.  My question... is perhaps neither easy or proper, but please bear with me.  And let me jump some tracks.
Way back when we all saw shows on something called T V.  Some were 30 minutes, some 60.  Many Were dramas, whether medical, police, western, period, legal, ME, Sci-Fi-, and from there other sub-genres... such as a short seasoned space western. Yes, I mean "FIREFLY".  There is also "Buffy:tVS", CSI, of all the series ST: Voyager, and of course, Xena, and so on.
Also, in C5, strip 16 `five stories` is where We see words on a page...
So, my question is this, and I'm quite certain other readers might agree.
ANY chance to read Those stories, or some of Lisa's earlier works, like the ones that got Allison hooked?  Or even of Maya/Jade?
Odd, isn't it?  I'm sitting here asking for the `written stories` of, what is indeed, a fictional character herself.
Well, you made them all... So Very life like.  Still, I wonder what Maya and Jade might be like??
I offer 3 examples of fanfiction to show how powerful the Written word can ensnare even us, human beings.
www.ralst.com/GhostBed.HTM                                                "Of The Ghost in My Bed"
www.altfic.com/subtextfic/buff…           "Human Layers"
www.ralst.com/AndThen.HTM                                                           "And Then..."
I just wonder....
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:iconnachomon:
NachoMon Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016
They´re so absolutely adorable!
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:iconsenkkobyte:
senkkobyte Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what a journey wow!
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:iconklenesk:
Klenesk Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
STOP BEING CUTE GODDAMMIT! I'M GETTING CAVITIES JUST LOOKING AT THIS!!
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:iconcapnflynn:
CapnFlynn Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2016  Professional Filmographer
Ally lip-bite! These two are so adorable! <3
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:iconsmithca1988:
smithca1988 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2016
You can tell these two love each other by how Ally and Lisa are looking at each other. Now in time it is in the comic they need to realise they are in love and were pretty much dating before the fight.
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:iconfranciscomagno:
FranciscoMagno Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2016
Esta muy muy genial
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:iconacecsonaashke:
Acecsonaashke Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2016
This reminds me of Mistress and I. We didn't communicate and our story almost ended way too soon. Thankfully we were able to admit we still had feelings for each-other. Now we make sure to communicate and make sure to always set time aside where we just enjoy snuggling and watching something silly on T.V.
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andreealupsa Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I discovered their story about two years ago, when a girl lured me into a lot of fun, based on it. Our story came to an end eventually, but since then I've been continuously checking for updates on Ally and Lisa... I got hooked up! :D I just can't thank you enough for this amazing piece of art you are sharing with us, your fans. Keep up the great work!
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hobnobrev Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016
You know, because she's kinda "luring Ally in with her stories", I think it would be better for the red "swish" of fabric to be an ink trail made up of words and Lisa is holding a Pen in one hand and an inkwell in the other.  

:)
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:iconallievapanda:
allievapanda Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2016
I guess with this drawing he's referring to the cover of... i think... the fifth volume, with lisa having ally all trapped in this veil/piece/? of fabric
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:iconmata4nuistudios:
Mata4NuiStudios Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Heck yeah!
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:iconcattiebrie1993:
cattiebrie1993 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Whooo!  Absolutely love the cast Ally is still wearing La la la la   awesome, dude, I cannot wait until I can buy the next comic! 
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:iconkomondantesalazar:
KomondanteSalazar Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Заебись рисунок
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:iconlemoncore:
lemoncore Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Are we going to be able to read the story she wrote? As in page per page as a text (as if it was written on the forums she writes in) 0: I wonder if the text will be accompanied by drawings or viceversa :D
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:iconbobyleejon:
Bobyleejon Featured By Owner Edited Jun 2, 2016
sees notification, sees its from shiniez, sees its not a new page, cries

also, for one horrible moment i thought chapter five was done already, thank the creator (see what i did there?) that's not the case
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:iconcruelestcut:
CruelestCut Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
I absolutely LOVE this picture! This story echos so much of me and my partner. Is it ever possible to see this as a print? I'd buy it in a heartbeat!
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gtbarsi Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
Love the series!
Love the image!

Is Ally's cast removable, is that why I see the flap coming from her palm and over her knuckles?
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:iconoutcastangel696:
OutcastAngel696 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Probably. This is drawn during the end of the healing process when you're given a removable brace for the broken limb.
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:iconshiniez:
shiniez Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
she always had a splint. she didn't break a bone just injured a ligament :)
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:iconoutcastangel696:
OutcastAngel696 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh, I see. xD
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:iconh8eweawl:
h8eweawl Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
Thank Goodness. I am really going through some serious withdrawal symptoms here. And then I will have to wait again for Book 6...argg, damn this addiction of mine. I blame my addiction on you Stjepan Šejić. I was normal before starting this series. Okay maybe not normal, but I wasn't drooling over the thought of the next book by Weber or Butcher. Okay, maybe Butcher, but Dresden man. Anyway keep up the good work and please keep giving us those peeks at the end of the books. Almost like watching the credits at a Marvel film.  :)
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:iconlunna009:
Lunna009 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
Love the smiles these two have. And super duper excited about book happening soon!
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:iconstereoscopecomics:
StereoscopeComics Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks amazing!  (°٢° )ノ*:・゚✧
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:iconcopy3ms:
Copy3ms Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
When I saw the writings on the pages all i could think of was "wow, that's an advance version of chicken scratch" ^^
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:iconhalkeye20:
halkeye20 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
this would make a great cover
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:iconrhedkrow:
rhedkrow Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Squeeeeeeeeee!!!!! So EXCITED!!!
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:iconshastania:
Shastania Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
*pterodactyl screeching* MY HEART CANNOT TAKE THE FEEEELS!
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:iconmadgahst:
Madgahst Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Yay !
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:iconunspokenkibbles:
unspokenkibbles Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Just want to give a shout-out to the way the characters are cheated out towards the camera in way that feels almost completely natural. If I weren't an actor looking for these kinds of things I don't think I would have spotted it.
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:iconfulcrum15:
Fulcrum15 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
LOVELove 
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:icons-r-k:
S-R-K Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
beautiful.
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:iconmikehollowhead:
mikehollowhead Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
at it's worst point's this series score's a perfect 10 with me, and I use a 1-5 scale.
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:iconpwartenberg:
PWartenberg Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
wait, where's Chapter 6: My Sharona?
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:iconkaze26:
kaze26 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Awesome
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:icontesscas:
TessCas Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Student General Artist
Gorgeous. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous image... and I must say I love the role reversal happening here! 
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Shadowknight1121 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
love it this is very lovable couple.
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:iconodin200000:
Odin200000 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Adorable.

A small critisizm, if I may; the shading between Ally's back and arm is just a bit too dark. It makes her look a bit thick around the middle.
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Coengar2 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Actually it's not a sling. It's a splint, so it can be easily removed to slip on an opera glove. Sorry,just being nitpicky (I work in the medical field, we're kinda anal about little details like this =) )

Anyway, love the picture and am looking forward to the happy ending we all know is coming. Hope it comes soon =)
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:iconshiniez:
shiniez Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
SPLINT! YES! THANK YOU! i hate it when i can't remember the word XD
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:iconroycegrey:
RoyceGrey Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
That's right, Lisa.  Ensnare your. . . Domme.   Take the . . . initiative.

This is such a good story.  So few actual cliches.
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drakenimmortal Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Stunning as always.  Loving the expressions, those beautiful smiles...the mischief in Lisa's eyes.
Can't wait for more of their tale. 
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:iconmirrorkhaos:
MirrorKhaos Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
outstanding as always.
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:iconlooking4work:
Looking4Work Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Your work is so good.

The picture of the two of them is so sweet and romantic, and the design of the piece, with Lisa's stories swirling around them, is the perfect frame.
There's almost a holiday-Christmasy feel to this. The swirling white pages are like a snowstorm, and the twinkling light effects behind them remind me of holiday/tree lights. On a subconscious level, it adds to the romance of the image.
And I've found my new wallpaper.
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InsoLENTinsO Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
The comic is going for a year end release maybe?
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:iconlooking4work:
Looking4Work Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Sunstone volume 5 will be released September 6. (I've pre-ordered my copy from Amazon.com!)
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:iconsmithca1988:
smithca1988 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
Me TOO.
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:iconshiniez:
shiniez Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
has nothing to do with the release time, just has to do with comic time itself. :)
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:iconnodox:
Nodox Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Student General Artist
So cute <3
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