how do you do outfits ohmygosh and ughghghghg the character development and it's not all sex, it's fuckin emotional which is great for me and I swear to God ufakdlsjflaskjdf;lkj stop it dammit I'm falling appart it's 1:10 am and I have school tomorrow and a quiz first thing in the morning and fuck this is such a good read I wanna write like you ;3;
I really have to say, besides the very "inviting" drawings, the expressions and small gestures you put in there, your story is very believable. Until now I've rarely met something as fascinating and....hm..... let's say well developed as this story is.
I have never been in the the Dom/Sub thing but I got to admit I had to read all of this from start to finish in one sitting. I cant wait to see how this plays out and the Story behind it is amazing. Its not like a poorly made script u see in porn or bad mangas its A very interesting and exciting story to read. And to top it all of I hate reading. So for me to say that is something lol
Character development is a solid call. Now they talk as friends. Ally gets into why all loneliness in her life and Lisa confesses about her discomfort about being in a lesbian relationship. I need this story to go at least 5 chapters LOL. A chapter or 2 of background will build the story even more.