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(Contains: sexual themes)
wot a twist hun, anyways this one is gonna be updated into first chapter.

so , why do it this way, well it is simple, through the course of the story i will get into switching monologues, showing stuff from different angles, and have characters state some opinions in hindsight, so i figured this solves my problem and makes the storytelling easie------sure i could have been more clever...buut im a lazy slacker so... what you see is what you get muahahaha
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Looking4Work Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member
A very bad sign when it begins with the removal of a wedding ring. Kind of rules out a happy ending, no matter what comes next.
(Of course, I will keep reading...)
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eramosat Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
we are at your pleasurable mercy!
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BlackChapters Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome stuff. I like it
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000RainbowChick000 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this beginning, so easy going yet Deep, very nice. And your drawing style is beautiful!
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JustaJeeper Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Love everything about this but I am having a hard time figuring out the proper order to read them in.
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Mudfoot001 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
OK, so this whole thing is magnificent.
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Phoneix-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing :) Really interesting start
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Stvz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
I have no idea what is going on (just got here). And I already love it. :)

Makes me want to pick up my own writing... yeah, like that's going to happen...
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Meant to comment on this some time ago. YppleJax described this to me, and I think it's lovely and a sweet story. :heart:
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Angel--of--Mysteries Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Underwhelmed? I'm the perfect amount of whelmed, thank you!^^ The way you drew/painted this is breathtaking, and I loved the way her shadow looked in the sunlight! She already has a great personality and has managed to make me laugh already ^^
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