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wot a twist hun, anyways this one is gonna be updated into first chapter.

so , why do it this way, well it is simple, through the course of the story i will get into switching monologues, showing stuff from different angles, and have characters state some opinions in hindsight, so i figured this solves my problem and makes the storytelling easie------sure i could have been more clever...buut im a lazy slacker so... what you see is what you get muahahaha
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Tiafain789 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
This is by FAR the best story I've gotten so invested into the characters in a long, long time.
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SHINA87 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  New member
Very good start :)
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Looking4Work Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  New member
A very bad sign when it begins with the removal of a wedding ring. Kind of rules out a happy ending, no matter what comes next.
(Of course, I will keep reading...)
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JTM93 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I think it is more of removing the ring to write. A surprisingly common practice to keep the ring from rubbing the finger raw.
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Looking4Work Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  New member
Really? Didn't know that. Thanks.
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eramosat Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
we are at your pleasurable mercy!
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BlackChapters Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome stuff. I like it
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000RainbowChick000 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this beginning, so easy going yet Deep, very nice. And your drawing style is beautiful!
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JustaJeeper Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Love everything about this but I am having a hard time figuring out the proper order to read them in.
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Mudfoot001 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
OK, so this whole thing is magnificent.
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