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wot a twist hun, anyways this one is gonna be updated into first chapter.

so , why do it this way, well it is simple, through the course of the story i will get into switching monologues, showing stuff from different angles, and have characters state some opinions in hindsight, so i figured this solves my problem and makes the storytelling easie------sure i could have been more clever...buut im a lazy slacker so... what you see is what you get muahahaha
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Observaty Featured By Owner 6 days ago
I read the first volume of Sunstone (couldn't find volume 2, so sad :'l ) and I got rather curious about the origins of what is sure to become one of my favorite comics. SO here I am, at the beginning ^^ I'm gonna enjoy that ride, oh yeah!
sbonavida Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015
Lovely!! This reading is like a sponge absorbent.
Shatterpath Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
I don't find this underwhelming at all. This is the deep breath before setting out on the journey.
TheRealLazurman Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015  New Deviant
As a fellow writer of fanfiction, I can sympathize with this thought process far too well.
KantyBena20 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 13, 2015  New Deviant
I just started to re-reading this, translating it to my girlfriend, and now I realized of some details that I didn't see the first time I read this... Lisa's long hair, the complain when she cracked her knuckles, Alan with Anne in the photo, the "Forever mine" inscription in the ring... Even the lack of stops, commas in some parts of the text!!!

I went here because of the illustrations and I stay because of the story!!! This story is amazing!!! I will buy this in physical format ASAP!!!
Bravetiger101 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015

four things:

1. Has any of this happened to you in real life?
2. How did you learn to draw like this?
3. I've only read this, and I'm hooked
4. I'm assuming your favorite color is red...
Tiffanyiscool Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015
wow,I'm really interested in this now.I like your art style.
0mniessence Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
i read about this comic in a blog... not sure yet how i feel about it, but your drawings are very good, i mainly just came for the yuri tho ^^
Mad-Man-with-a-Pen Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Nice :) I just got all caught up with Sunstone and Shiniez have to say you've written a wonderful love story here. Seriously all the images of sexy ladies having their fun aside, Ally and Lisa are so great together. Can't wait to see how things work out in Chapter 5! 
drakenimmortal Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
The start of ANY project is always the worst...gotta love that procrastination time...
Leon-Z Featured By Owner May 28, 2015


FUCK to draw some NSWF stuff
VincentAParker Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dear just personified what I've been going through for a few years with my own story. Shit damn!
joekou52 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015
want does the engraving on the ring say
anthrax117 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
'Forever Mine'
joekou52 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015
cool thanks
Octavian-the-Great Featured By Owner May 16, 2015
too much text
MickArriaga Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
So true.  I once started an online story in a chat group based on the first sentence: "The frog sat by the door with eyes as big as saucers." It turned out to be a fantasy about sorcery. A wizard lusting after a maiden and an unexpected "prince" to save her. No, he wasn't from nobility, but he was her prince nonetheless. So keep at it. You do a great job!
Warchief-Sariel83 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooo... Sunstone ^^
Yurosoku Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
I feel her pain, jumping first in to a story writing is NEVER easy. Well done with the story!
rasterimage Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015   General Artist
Oh, lord.

Not only not underwhelming but I'd say all too resonant.

You're one hell of a storyteller.

Not that it isn't a classic bit of stage business to do a carefully set up and paced telling of how there is nothing to tell.

But yes.
And yes.
And yes.

Oh, and I just love the sunset.
Ask-MyMPD Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You have me hooked from the first page. I love the lighting I love your natural art style and I am already deeply in love with this character. 
CostaRicaMoskito Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I freaking love the drawing. Teach me.
GeckosFancies Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
I love the glow from the window, it lends the sequence such warmth. Lots of little details that spark my curiosity. Also I enjoy the meta writing thinking here... ^_^ I like this approach to an intro! it makes it feel real to me. 
A friend told me about Sunstone, the premise makes me really hopeful, the intro more so. I'm gonna read on soon as I have time to sit down in peace. Looking forward to it.
evahopkins Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Catching up on this charmer of a comic again before buying the collection. <3
CarbonxKiwi Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Oh wow, the art style is beautiful and the line work is excellent with the slight sketchiness--feels very true to life, without impeccably cut and defined lines--and the colouring is divine. Love the outfits, too, and can't wait to get into that storyline of hers! :D
deviantxman Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
Wow. Awesome first, uuuh, zero page.  Laugh. Sexy already. Interesting.  Thoughtful. Beautifully drawn.
Tiafain789 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
This is by FAR the best story I've gotten so invested into the characters in a long, long time.
SHINA87 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
Very good start :)
Looking4Work Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
A very bad sign when it begins with the removal of a wedding ring. Kind of rules out a happy ending, no matter what comes next.
(Of course, I will keep reading...)
JTM93 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it is more of removing the ring to write. A surprisingly common practice to keep the ring from rubbing the finger raw.
Looking4Work Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014
Really? Didn't know that. Thanks.
eramosat Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
we are at your pleasurable mercy!
BlackChapters Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome stuff. I like it
000RainbowChick000 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this beginning, so easy going yet Deep, very nice. And your drawing style is beautiful!
JustaJeeper Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Love everything about this but I am having a hard time figuring out the proper order to read them in.
Mudfoot001 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
OK, so this whole thing is magnificent.
Phoneix-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing :) Really interesting start
Stvz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
I have no idea what is going on (just got here). And I already love it. :)

Makes me want to pick up my own writing... yeah, like that's going to happen...
hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Professional Writer
Meant to comment on this some time ago. YppleJax described this to me, and I think it's lovely and a sweet story. :heart:
Angel--of--Mysteries Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Underwhelmed? I'm the perfect amount of whelmed, thank you!^^ The way you drew/painted this is breathtaking, and I loved the way her shadow looked in the sunlight! She already has a great personality and has managed to make me laugh already ^^
evahopkins Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm finally diving in to this story. :) I've delayed too long!
NICHOLASROTHDRAWS Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
MrsBlinkandMissItt Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my God, I know them feels! Haha, this was just amazing in every way, but I especially love the colors. So pretty!Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] 
KisaraelElementum Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes i am the exact same way when writing........... and............ damn it.... it is awesome.....
Ironysince1997 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really amazing. I especially love the  silhouette in panel 12. It's just so wonderfully real and funny. "Bah...F*ck it!....Procrastination time..." True That Stamp Seto Kousuke (Being shy and kawaii) [10] 
sevenyears3 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
As a writer, I giggled as I read this!  It is soooo me!  loved it!
Shaudawn Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I completely relate.  I faved it just for that recognition.
AgentB-7 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Student Writer
Pal, you're genius, do you know that?
Swoopmott Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I have now seen the perfect first page to a story. This is just beautiful
Hypersaurus Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dat lip bite!
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