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wot a twist hun, anyways this one is gonna be updated into first chapter.

so , why do it this way, well it is simple, through the course of the story i will get into switching monologues, showing stuff from different angles, and have characters state some opinions in hindsight, so i figured this solves my problem and makes the storytelling easie------sure i could have been more clever...buut im a lazy slacker so... what you see is what you get muahahaha
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Angel--of--Mysteries Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Underwhelmed? I'm the perfect amount of whelmed, thank you!^^ The way you drew/painted this is breathtaking, and I loved the way her shadow looked in the sunlight! She already has a great personality and has managed to make me laugh already ^^
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evahopkins Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm finally diving in to this story. :) I've delayed too long!
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NICHOLASROTHDRAWS Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Great
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MrsBlinkandMissItt Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my God, I know them feels! Haha, this was just amazing in every way, but I especially love the colors. So pretty!Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] 
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KisaraelElementum Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes i am the exact same way when writing........... and............ damn it.... it is awesome.....
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Ironysince1997 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really amazing. I especially love the  silhouette in panel 12. It's just so wonderfully real and funny. "Bah...F*ck it!....Procrastination time..." True That Stamp Seto Kousuke (Being shy and kawaii) [10] 
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sevenyears3 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  New member
As a writer, I giggled as I read this!  It is soooo me!  loved it!
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Shaudawn Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I completely relate.  I faved it just for that recognition.
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AgentB-7 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Student Writer
Pal, you're genius, do you know that?
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Swoopmott Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I have now seen the perfect first page to a story. This is just beautiful
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