I came across a tumblr post linking to this story just 10-15 minutes ago? I love it already and so far can name every video game they've referenced. The T-rex was easier in the first game but surprisingly it was better executed in it too.
Very uncommon in our world, everyone is too judgmental and ignorant, afraid of what they don't understand. But these two have what everyone wants companionship and true understanding. It's almost too real.
We love how you focus on everything but the sex, knowing that everything else is far more important and informative than the sex. The narration is wonderful and incredibly insightful. I do not even care that the sex is at the back and the real material is at the forefront. That is how it should be.
I made an account so i could view this, on the recommendation of a friend. While i do enjoy good ol' fashion lesbian smut, and a good story or two, i find that the combination of the two is something that is rather absent. You sir, have brought story and erotica together in a way 50 Shades could never do. +1 internets for this man.
Shiniez, you really got a way with descriptions. Like the emotions behind the s&m play, and other parts of the comic as well. I mean, people can identify with all the feelings these 2 woman are having. Nice storytelling!
I do love how you develop the realness of the characters in a D/s relationship, is is very much how it is in real life and I thank you for giving it that added extra real level, show a real maturity in writing...
shiniez... I adore you... and I curse you... you show what a perfect D/s relationship should be... and one that I'll never attain... why, why, did you do this to me?
shiniez... I adore you... and I curse you... I see the wondrous true nature of BDSM and relationships in your stories and art... and know I will wander the earth, never to personally know such a relationship... why, why did you do this to me?
shiniez... why... why did you do this to me?
shiniez... my life is now dark and cold and hollow... I will never be happy again...
shiniez... why?... why? why did you do this to me?
I agree with you 100%. Absolutely the same reaction.
I'm new to Deviantart so this story has made me take a heart-rending look at my whole life and sexuality, and it's scary when I look at it. I had a D/s relationship when I was pretty young with an even younger mistress, but I guess I wimped out and left her because I had all the doubts the character Lisa talks about. Crap! I'm screwed.
No, my friend, do not think that at all! You see, what shiniez provides here is fiction, and my response above was when I first was exposed to his work. I took it too literally. It is just art. Beautifully and deeply erotic, but just art.
I've since, thankfully, gotten over my despondency, and have put things in proper perspective. And never think you're screwed! Never give up! I am in the latter middle age/early senior years at 57 and have been lucky enough to join an active fetish group where the women are all Mistresses to be served by us male submissives. I've just recently joined, but it looks to be a wonderful experience. So take heart! And never, never, never, give up!