I came across a tumblr post linking to this story just 10-15 minutes ago? I love it already and so far can name every video game they've referenced. The T-rex was easier in the first game but surprisingly it was better executed in it too.
Very uncommon in our world, everyone is too judgmental and ignorant, afraid of what they don't understand. But these two have what everyone wants companionship and true understanding. It's almost too real.
We love how you focus on everything but the sex, knowing that everything else is far more important and informative than the sex. The narration is wonderful and incredibly insightful. I do not even care that the sex is at the back and the real material is at the forefront. That is how it should be.
I made an account so i could view this, on the recommendation of a friend. While i do enjoy good ol' fashion lesbian smut, and a good story or two, i find that the combination of the two is something that is rather absent. You sir, have brought story and erotica together in a way 50 Shades could never do. +1 internets for this man.
Shiniez, you really got a way with descriptions. Like the emotions behind the s&m play, and other parts of the comic as well. I mean, people can identify with all the feelings these 2 woman are having. Nice storytelling!
I do love how you develop the realness of the characters in a D/s relationship, is is very much how it is in real life and I thank you for giving it that added extra real level, show a real maturity in writing...