*Ranting to the characters* Yarr people learn some direct communication and use your words. It makes relationships so much easier than trying mindread each other and communicate by hints and implications. Also, stereotyping genders is so old and cheap, we are all humans, not separate species.
This was soo much funnier for me the first time through this page, because I didn't notice her wrapping the scarf, so to me after he mention the collar again and she got mad about it, she suddenly had a scarf around it. It reminded me of the scott pilgrim jokes.
Ah relationships. The must important thing for people to keep up in a relationship is communication. Some argue that it's trust, but how do you trust someone that you fail to communicate with effectively. How do you expect for them to trust you? Also nice intro of yet another character. He seems like the loving, sometimes bum of a brother. And I love how he's going to poke fun at her collar. Heh.
mr. shiniez, your lineart is getting sloppy. this is supposed to be constructive critique, so don't get me wrong. it's still superb, but theres so many derp panels in this page, it's becoming quite apperent.
derp...panels... its free i do it on my own free time. i thought the whole a bajillion typos kinda revealed the fact that i don't really care, but if it didn't, i will restate it again, i just don't care. when i feel like putting an effort i will, when i don't... i wont. it is ultimately just a hobby of mine which i do on the little free time i have. you arent really paying for professional quality here XD
i dont mean to sound harsh, but i have to remind people of this every now and then. my schedule is insane, i am also married so i have alot of other things to do, i also have aaaaalot of work to do every day... so not evera panel will make souur jaw drop, but its really not its purpose. it's purpose is to tell the story however non eventfull it may be
Yes, this i understand and know. If you are okay with the derp, that is your thing to decide and it is my thing to respect whatever decision you make. i just thought, maybe you didn't notice (you did, but how should i know) ? because quite a few of the faces look to me a bit picasso style if you know what i mean, eyes not fitting together in perspective and all that... I know you will just do what you do so i don't really have a say but then i can simply go ahead and point out stuff anyway and ... uh, i'll stop here.
he is an ass! XD also her real name might just be elisabeth, or he may just have been such an ass to go and tell everyone that her name is elisabeth and she prefers to be called betty... brothers are assholes
i notice your comics getting more n' more scribbly. completely different from the first chapter. T__T can't wait for the next page to be put together, though. i wonder how she'll handle this one! hehehe xD;