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aaand moving forward. and yes i'm going somewhere with this, patience¨!
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mla197 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh sure sure it aint a dog collar, but when ally is the one making you walk on all-fours, tugging at the rope conveniently tied on the ring, you bark on her command.
Stallnig Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2015
This story's quite packed with delicious jokes. I like.
Jaquina Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Does anybody know where I can buy a Collar which looks similar to Lisas? Thanx
derDaken Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015
stealth694 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015
LOL  I know the feeling The best way to sum something like this up is

Men's OS is Windows and Woman's OS is Linux,  so they are always crashing.
Bobyleejon Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
you know, that REALLY makes me want to make an 'insert USB' joke....
Amenarae Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Can I just say that Mike is very attractive with all that unruly stubble? Then again, I just think your redheads are all sexy as hell.
Myrethy Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

...Sorry, but despite all this stuff Lisa's saying to her bro about talking things out, she is doing very little of that talking to Ally!
Nevir-Saedi Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
Eh? They've known each other 2 and a half weeks and she's learned Ally's deep dark secret. The only thing they aren't discussing is her feelings being more than what they had originally bargained on... And once again, 2.5 weeks. How would you feel if you meet someone and they suddenly declare their deep and undying love for you and you either don't feel it or worse yet they are just infatuated and another 2 weeks later they aren't feeling it again?
Caine001 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
kazerniel Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Ranting to the characters* Yarr people learn some direct communication and use your words. It makes relationships so much easier than trying mindread each other and communicate by hints and implications. Also, stereotyping genders is so old and cheap, we are all humans, not separate species.
XxDeviousOtakuxX Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Agreed. Direct communication is key in relationships. Its worked wonder on my Marriage.
flamewolf393 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Its far too well fitted and appropriate to be merely a dog color! Also wrong place for the ring XD.
Tonnar Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
psst... psst...
we big brothers aren't always stupid or dumb or thick or whatever...
RoyceGrey Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Ah, family.
B-Rosso Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I can just picture such a smug, absolute teasing way he said "Y'know...Dog Collar" Haha That as great.
yirulilota Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Ginger, quick to temper and now her nickname is Lassie...yep Lisa's Scottish alright xD
MomoModified Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
LOL, now I want to see her younger brother! And also want to see if this one is going to start doing BDSM too, wish I had someone close to talk about it with or go to events =(
zokizamantikore Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
does he dyes his beard? o_o 
bloodmaker Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
This was soo much funnier for me the first time through this page, because I didn't notice her wrapping the scarf, so to me after he mention the collar again and she got mad about it, she suddenly had a scarf around it. It reminded me of the scott pilgrim jokes. :)
Bloodnut101 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
There are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO many rangas! Fuck yeah, representing the race like a BOSS!
MadHattress77 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When he said "lassie" I was like "Wait, is he scotish?!"... I'm such a dumbass:iconsweatplz:
Legion-Commander Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Lol same here xD 
Leofaeg Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought the exact same things too omfg
CheetaHamSloth Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
son a b... I guess, lol
SpreadsAndShuffles Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
What is with the redheads in this?! XD (Not that anyone is arguing, but still! It seems like it's either red, black, or the occaisional blonde in these haha)
Pyreiris Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There need to be more redheads in the world. We're a slowly dying breed. . .
SpreadsAndShuffles Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
I wouldn't say dying, just not appreciated enough.
SanityZero Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
He's funny
PhoenixSpark Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
that awkward moment when the main character and I have the same first name. Even spelled the same way. XD Haha!
Uthardar Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
darkbane1905 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
you know this really made me think about communication. it like the difference between this and traffic signs. one has a course which teaches you
Sceritz Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Ah relationships. The must important thing for people to keep up in a relationship is communication. Some argue that it's trust, but how do you trust someone that you fail to communicate with effectively. How do you expect for them to trust you? Also nice intro of yet another character. He seems like the loving, sometimes bum of a brother. And I love how he's going to poke fun at her collar. Heh.
Amiln Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Haha.. very nice.
halkeye20 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
i love the srs of it all
DrMcQuark Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dont rush it. The story will tell itself at its own pace.
BPurg Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
It's the "Ever thought you might not be scratching her specific itches" and the all to common blow off is what drives the point home.
djt-Metzger Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
lovveee it lol I was totally there with her, I was like 'yeah, wait what? Lassie? *facepalm*' xD
CondescendingArthole Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh man I'm so excited for more of this story. I am just hanging on ever bit, I love the story telling, the art, relationships and characters. This is just...awesome.
undeaddreamer01 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
is it sad, that even tho its not a dog collar to us, we're still tempted to bite the fuck out of the assholes that say it is or those that whistle at us like dogs? -_-
TheConsortOfSummer Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Hmm...tempting storytelling you've got going here. I'm very curious to see how the brother fits into the story, and how this past relationship of Lisa will play out over the coming panels.

As always, meticulous attention to detail is your forte, and hat's off to you!
NightFall-1 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Have ever thought about putting all you pics in a massive pdf and in chronological order?
shiniez Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
um...i did that, iits in the gallery :) XD
Whezzan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just fell in love with the brother... nyohohoho!
ShortFocus Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Photographer
I love you sketchy-ish style and the entire story. Something is just captivating me and won't let me go until I finish the story... So please, make more? :)
nemedeus Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mr. shiniez, your lineart is getting sloppy. this is supposed to be constructive critique, so don't get me wrong. it's still superb, but theres so many derp panels in this page, it's becoming quite apperent.
shiniez Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
derp...panels... its free i do it on my own free time. i thought the whole a bajillion typos kinda revealed the fact that i don't really care, but if it didn't, i will restate it again, i just don't care. when i feel like putting an effort i will, when i don't... i wont. it is ultimately just a hobby of mine which i do on the little free time i have. you arent really paying for professional quality here XD

i dont mean to sound harsh, but i have to remind people of this every now and then. my schedule is insane, i am also married so i have alot of other things to do, i also have aaaaalot of work to do every day... so not evera panel will make souur jaw drop, but its really not its purpose. it's purpose is to tell the story however non eventfull it may be :)
nemedeus Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, this i understand and know. If you are okay with the derp, that is your thing to decide and it is my thing to respect whatever decision you make. i just thought, maybe you didn't notice (you did, but how should i know) ? because quite a few of the faces look to me a bit picasso style if you know what i mean, eyes not fitting together in perspective and all that...
I know you will just do what you do so i don't really have a say but then i can simply go ahead and point out stuff anyway and ... uh, i'll stop here.
shiniez Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
just because you took it maturely i went and edited it a bit :)
nemedeus Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, you shouldn't have! How am i supposed to ever make it up to you? Oh, i know! Fanart! But, what will i draw? dammit! I'll work on something.
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