I found bits and pieces of this story on other websites, just enough to get my interest in it up. I got to admit that it was more the characters and their interactions that caught my interest than the hot lesbian BDSM sex. (although that's nice too)
Can't wait to see more of it and i'm planning to buy the graphic novel as soon as amazon gets it in stock.
It's interesting how some of the biggest "directors" in life (those who take command and seem to be the "alphas") have an inner need to relinquish - and how some of the most quiet and withdrawn people make the best dominants. On another note: if your aim is to make the reader fall in love with these characters right along with their partner, I foresee success.