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(Contains: nudity and sexual themes)
this is how the girls actually met...there was no force used, or drugs or mind control....or whatever else....they just needed each other....cause in the end ... everyone needs somebody
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Briskenzu Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
my gawd its wonderful! and the art is to die for... I want to draw like you one day (hopefully). :D
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oxgassassin Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
That's wonderful! I can see much of me in that story, it made me cry a little :o You're one lucky person! :D
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jpologuzi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
*cough cough* grammar *cough cough*
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Charlys90 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  New member
I cant wait more, Amazon come on!!!
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julsxxx Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  New member
Me guata el diseño y la historia me parece genial.... lovely¡¡
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The-Blood-Dragon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
First page: Already laughed, already felt, already a bit turned on, yet still recognizing the great writing and art style. Hmmm.... now this, will be a great read.
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werewolf-hime1313 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Is there a place one can get a collar similar to the one Lisa is wearing at the top of the page?
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deviantxman Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  New member
I absolutely love how human this story is. 
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MelanieHawking Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
smiels
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dethlaric Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dear lord that comment u made in the description nearly made me cry ;-;
cause its so true!
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EsLightning Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014
Psh Lie's. I saw ally using mind control, I know how jedi tricks work.
YOU WONT TRICK ME.

(ps, decided to reread all your capters.)
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jamesgunner123 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014
...very beautiful strip...really tugs at the heart string there at the end...=3
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Coengar2 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
I found bits and pieces of this story on other websites, just enough to get my interest in it up. I got to admit that it was more the characters and their interactions that caught my interest than the hot lesbian BDSM sex. (although that's nice too)

Can't wait to see more of it and i'm planning to buy the graphic novel as soon as amazon gets it in stock.
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Caine001 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Impressive! Great artwork and cool story!!
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Djake Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's interesting how some of the biggest "directors" in life (those who take command and seem to be the "alphas") have an inner need to relinquish - and how some of the most quiet and withdrawn people make the best dominants.
On another note: if your aim is to make the reader fall in love with these characters right along with their partner, I foresee success.
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Orkideh84 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Finally a love story that doesn't have to do with stalking, abuse nor another horrible bdsm story like Fifty Shades of Shit.
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MegaAnimeFreak7 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
"Fifty shades of shit" I can't breathe XDD
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EdwardX1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
Yeah, I can't stand that shit.
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44NTW44 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student Writer
Hear hear! 
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female-muscle-comics Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Excellent story. Made me laugh from the start.
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scorpionlover42 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Well done. Exceptional art and a story line that gets your attention. Clap 
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animekiddkappa Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Love the series. One of the best I've ever read.Clap :happybounce: 
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patpowers Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Cmon, you can't tell me that Ally didn't make domineering jazz hands at Lisa, turning her into a love zombie on the spot!
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shaggyxangel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
AMAZING! Have you read Jesse Bering's book, "Perv"? The first chapter opens with "You are a sexual deviant. A pervert, through and through." It uncannily echoes one of Lisa's lines!
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David-Richards Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014   Writer
Hey, it's the "origin" issue. Not drawn out, but enough to keep even the most distracted reader's attention with still a wealth of info about both gals. Ok, you got me.
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alorix Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
This..kinda hits home in a certain way. 
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FlyingRagePanda Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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cholo0107 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
I love it! Great story! Awesome Art!
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Heretic1311 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
I love this start!
No matter how often, this one page makes clear that fun is well intended in the story.
And the sex. Never forget about the sex.
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AuskaTarquinEireonus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
The power of words never cease to amaze us. The wisdom and truth in your words were profound. We found ourselves agreeing with what you said over and over. You have quite a gift with both words and art.
-Auska Tarquin
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bound-aussie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Thank you for writing this ... Everyone needs somebody... Exactly. It really spoke to me on so many levels: not least my very deep need to meet a woman who understands why I want to be tied up so much ... among other things. You also capture their emotions and the joy of a new realationship very, very well. Thank you again.
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lilfixit Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Just saying, this would be a lot easier to read if you added next links in the comments section.
...Great...now people will know I'm a pervert...lol.
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mythicalmind Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
dang it ive been restricted >:(
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GG6869 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Very Beautiful, a soft and sensuous start. We all have these hidden thoughts and we feel we are different, but just that one step of courage or leap of faith shows us we are just one of many! I have taken my leap now................ Thank you xXx
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Air-KC Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
i really like the way u have started the hole story and the thoughtfulness that u have place in every sentence or paragraph to grasp their feelings, in combination with the illustrations making them really vivid. its a job well done! congratsClap 
i just found it and read it ans its very interesting too!
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AlatheaSquared Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
Just discovered this in the last few days courtesy of spot in HeavyMetal. Great work! 37, married 15 years, and I can still identify with the feelings and uncertainty of 'new' relationship. You've captured it all wonderfully. 
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh this DID get very interesting!  I'm really liking it so far.
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Gray-Vizard Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
already better than 50 shades of BS
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amibloodangel Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Were so glad to see so many of you lovely people here tonight, and we would especially like to welcome all the representatives of illinois law enforcement community who have chosen to join us
In the palace hotel ballroom at this time. we do sincerely hope you'll all enjoy the show, and please remember people, that no matter who you are, and what you do to live, thrive and survive, there
still some things that make us all the same. you, me them, everybody, everybody.

Everybody needs somebody
Everybody needs somebody to love (someone to love)
Sweetheart to miss (sweetheart to miss)
Sugar to kiss (sugar to kiss)
I need you you you
I need you you you
I need you you you in the morning
I need you you you when my souls on fire

Sometimes I feel
I feel a little sad inside
When my baby mistreats me
I never never never have a place to hide
I need you

Sometimes I feel
I feel a little sad inside
When my baby mistreats me
I never never never have a place to hide
I need you you you
I need you you you
I need you you you
I need you you you
I need you

You know people when you do find that somebody
Hold that woman, hold that man
Love him, hold him, squeeze her, please her, hold her
Squeeze and please that person, give em all your love
Signify your feelings with every gentle caress
Because its so important to have that special somebody
To hold, kiss, miss, squeeze and please

Everybody needs somebody
Everybody needs somebody to love
Someone to love
Sweetheart to miss
Sugar to kiss
I need you you you
I need you you you
I need you you you...
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AMusoke Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
da fuq is that about??
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amibloodangel Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Blues Brothers...
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tozhma Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is a fine example of erotica, as opposed to pornography. wonderful!
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SatinSassy Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Oh my gah! I'm just starting this comic, I found it on tumblr... and... just wow... keep reading ;D
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TheeLadyLoLo Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
Brava, my dear ladies! 
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Celestine8 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013   Artisan Crafter
As someone who can relate to both girls and both roles, as a legit switch, it's nice to see a story begin in an appealing way that doesn't chase me off. Most books or writings involve the dominant or submissive being abused and traumatized; this means that the writer is telling you that you have to have something wrong with you, something broken and I've resented writers for it. Fifty shades of f-ed up and such. But with me and so many others, it's just who we are. More sensual in a dangerous sense. You sort of had it happen to your dominant, Alyson, but thank you for mostly resisting it. Despite this being erotica, I'm really hoping for female sexuality and feelings to actually come out in this, as so many writers seem to treat the females as the obligatory 'female parts' and not actual characters with real needs, desires and feelings.
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Riverovstyx Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm getting emotional
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seansxxy Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
brilliant art, story and subject....
thanks for sharing
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Man.... when I read 50 shades of grey, I discovered a new part in my sexuality. And reading this, it makes me want to explore it more! :D
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HandofCreation0 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really only came here out of mere curiosity, but I love the bit of humor thrown into the first part. "Wait don't leave yet!"
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SneakySammy Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
My girlfriend and I met online 3 years ago, and I've always wanted to put the experience down in writing, because she is the best thing that has ever happened, or WILL ever happen to me. I just noticed you from the recent notice, and will definitely be reading this whole story.
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