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this is how the girls actually met...there was no force used, or drugs or mind control....or whatever else....they just needed each other....cause in the end ... everyone needs somebody
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Firan25 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
:Let's out a high pitched squeee of excitement: omg i found you again!!! I missed your series so much T_T
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0mniessence Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Filmographer
oooh, ok, i like ^^ it's very interesting, and i feel kinda glad to know we're all pervs at heart lol i always thought i was too perverted for a girl >_>
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Tsukichan-1510 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Photographer
A nice story, the characters are realistic and could easily be anyone from normal life. I am only just starting to read this but I am already enjoying this.
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Leon-Z Featured By Owner May 28, 2015
...lost of BONDAGE AND LESBIAN SEX!?!?!?

WHAT DO WE NEED TO GET A HARDCOVER BOOK?!??!?!
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sando10 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015
I dig this.  I always had a fetish for BDSM.  I like a dominant woman.  It saddens me that people watch 50 Shades and think that that is what BDSM is all about.
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spudman98 Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
This is already better than 50 Shades of Grey, mostly because it's actually clever and witty, with interesting characters that aren't bland as cardboard boxes, and what's in those boxes is better than that fan-fiction turned book/film
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Krissy-K Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015
I so love this....
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The-SilverLining Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
How nice to see a story like this with such a non-dramatic beginning. More realistic in a way.
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:icondev-evan:
dev-evan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
Eres sensacional! Thanks for this :3
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sissyslave Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015
this is 100% true 
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Auroraflair Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
-tail sways happily- You write so perfectly >^^<
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Tre-Sky Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG this is my fave already <3
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Yukiesn04ever Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist
I like it! :D
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ZeCrazyAngel Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can kinda relate to this XD though I'm not into SM their's something else I hide. But meh, we'll see how it goes XD. Very nice page and the story seems very interesting right now! ^^
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Briskenzu Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
my gawd its wonderful! and the art is to die for... I want to draw like you one day (hopefully). :D
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oxgassassin Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
That's wonderful! I can see much of me in that story, it made me cry a little :o You're one lucky person! :D
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jpologuzi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
*cough cough* grammar *cough cough*
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Charlys90 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
I cant wait more, Amazon come on!!!
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julsxxx Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
Me guata el diseño y la historia me parece genial.... lovely¡¡
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The-Blood-Dragon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
First page: Already laughed, already felt, already a bit turned on, yet still recognizing the great writing and art style. Hmmm.... now this, will be a great read.
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werewolf-hime1313 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Is there a place one can get a collar similar to the one Lisa is wearing at the top of the page?
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deviantxman Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
I absolutely love how human this story is. 
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MelanieHawking Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
smiels
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dethlaric Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dear lord that comment u made in the description nearly made me cry ;-;
cause its so true!
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EsLightning Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014
Psh Lie's. I saw ally using mind control, I know how jedi tricks work.
YOU WONT TRICK ME.

(ps, decided to reread all your capters.)
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jamesgunner123 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014
...very beautiful strip...really tugs at the heart string there at the end...=3
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Coengar2 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
I found bits and pieces of this story on other websites, just enough to get my interest in it up. I got to admit that it was more the characters and their interactions that caught my interest than the hot lesbian BDSM sex. (although that's nice too)

Can't wait to see more of it and i'm planning to buy the graphic novel as soon as amazon gets it in stock.
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Caine001 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Impressive! Great artwork and cool story!!
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Djake Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's interesting how some of the biggest "directors" in life (those who take command and seem to be the "alphas") have an inner need to relinquish - and how some of the most quiet and withdrawn people make the best dominants.
On another note: if your aim is to make the reader fall in love with these characters right along with their partner, I foresee success.
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Orkideh84 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Finally a love story that doesn't have to do with stalking, abuse nor another horrible bdsm story like Fifty Shades of Shit.
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MegaAnimeFreak7 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
"Fifty shades of shit" I can't breathe XDD
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EdwardX1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, I can't stand that shit.
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44NTW44 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student Writer
Hear hear! 
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muscle-fan-comics Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Excellent story. Made me laugh from the start.
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scorpionlover42 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Well done. Exceptional art and a story line that gets your attention. Clap 
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animekiddkappa Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Love the series. One of the best I've ever read.Clap :happybounce: 
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patpowers Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Cmon, you can't tell me that Ally didn't make domineering jazz hands at Lisa, turning her into a love zombie on the spot!
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shaggyxangel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
AMAZING! Have you read Jesse Bering's book, "Perv"? The first chapter opens with "You are a sexual deviant. A pervert, through and through." It uncannily echoes one of Lisa's lines!
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David-Richards Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014   Writer
Hey, it's the "origin" issue. Not drawn out, but enough to keep even the most distracted reader's attention with still a wealth of info about both gals. Ok, you got me.
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alorix Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
This..kinda hits home in a certain way. 
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FlyingRagePanda Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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cholo0107 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
I love it! Great story! Awesome Art!
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Heretic1311 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
I love this start!
No matter how often, this one page makes clear that fun is well intended in the story.
And the sex. Never forget about the sex.
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AuskaTarquinEireonus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
The power of words never cease to amaze us. The wisdom and truth in your words were profound. We found ourselves agreeing with what you said over and over. You have quite a gift with both words and art.
-Auska Tarquin
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bound-aussie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Thank you for writing this ... Everyone needs somebody... Exactly. It really spoke to me on so many levels: not least my very deep need to meet a woman who understands why I want to be tied up so much ... among other things. You also capture their emotions and the joy of a new realationship very, very well. Thank you again.
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lilfixit Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Just saying, this would be a lot easier to read if you added next links in the comments section.
...Great...now people will know I'm a pervert...lol.
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mythicalmind Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
dang it ive been restricted >:(
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GG6869 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Very Beautiful, a soft and sensuous start. We all have these hidden thoughts and we feel we are different, but just that one step of courage or leap of faith shows us we are just one of many! I have taken my leap now................ Thank you xXx
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Air-KC Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
i really like the way u have started the hole story and the thoughtfulness that u have place in every sentence or paragraph to grasp their feelings, in combination with the illustrations making them really vivid. its a job well done! congratsClap 
i just found it and read it ans its very interesting too!
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AlatheaSquared Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
Just discovered this in the last few days courtesy of spot in HeavyMetal. Great work! 37, married 15 years, and I can still identify with the feelings and uncertainty of 'new' relationship. You've captured it all wonderfully. 
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