(Contains: sexual themes)
and it was the awkward pleading look from lisa that got ally back in the game.. cleared her mind and focused her for the fun night ahead XD
And that meeting is spot-on: EVERYONE but the most dense and self-absorbed go thru that. ..
Well, at least she made a good impression, even if she didn't realize it lol.
GODDAMMIT I'VE BEEN WORRIED SO MUCH XD AGH
I can enjoy this story for so many reasons but for the domineering kink spin to it. The lesbian component is actually perfectly well done. Back in the day, there were women spooked by homosexuality; who considered it a lifestyle cultivate oftentimes by the devious: having someone more in that world reaching out a hand can be daunting. That element is beautifully expressed here.
Also...nobody ever wants to admit they have a bladder on a first encounter: you might as well ask them to sit outside the door that's how embarrassing it can be. This was fucking hilarious; and the banal humanity displayed by Allison thoughtlessly offering directions just adds to the character.
And this is what I want to say the most: FUCK MAN I LOVE YOUR COLORING, LIKE, OMYGOD SO MUCH. Some parts you do so simple but they are so accurate!
Keep up! I'm lovin it