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fuckyeah imma drag this scene longer than your average dragonball fight!!!!
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Tiffanyiscool Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015
D: nuh!
atinverde Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015
Caine001 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
orlandobloomsbabe Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG that panel. Third from the bottom. UNFF!
flamewolf393 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Getting really deep. Such story.

And I love the picture. Amazingly well done!
WordVoyeur Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love your stuff. Besides the amazing art, it's the story that keeps me coming back. It just feels so poignant, without being overly drawn out. Sexy without being blatant. Loving and filled with emotion. Thank you for this. You have a true talent.
TheAshiro Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Sexuality, impressive character development AND Dragon Ball references, oficially this comic has it all.
kkita1 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
since i cant read the next panel cuz im not 18 yet can someone please explain what happens to marion
AqueousSerpent Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Still need help?
kkita1 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
that would be great please :hug:
AqueousSerpent Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Woah, didn't see this until now whoops
At one of the classes about BDSM, Ally ties Marion up and Marion enjoys it too much. Ally says that she herself went to far and taught Marion too much too fast, but enjoyed it too much to stop. But that's all that happened was that she tied Marion up, and Marion really became a sub that day.
(Dunno if you kept reading or not but I believe the rest in in the next page)
Then since then she kept trying to go further and do more stuff with Alan, she ends up tying herself to the bed waiting for Alan to come home as a surprise for him. But Alan had a lot of work to do so he stayed late and Marion was left on the bed for too long. Ally then found her tied to the bed and her hands were blue from lack of oxygen, and Marion was crying sunstone begging Ally to take the ropes off but if the ropes were taken off before the ambulance got there Marion would have lost her hands.
LillyanaKabal Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
The 3rd bottom panel was Magnificent.
LeraDraco69 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Love the Dragonball reference!
kingzings Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Ones anyone know what the style of rope tying Ally used to tie Marion's wrists to her arms is called?
shatteredglasscomic Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
For some pages, including this one, the text is very hard to read. You should fix that.
DaimyoSensei Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bahaha longer than the average dragon ball fight?? I think that's impossible xD
BinkaKitty Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
the anticipation is killing me!!!La la la la I think I've fainted. 
MadHattress77 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*reads description* Phhff...This is better than a DB fight scene!
coronadocs Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Yes you did drag, but there was a difference: when DBZ dragged it out I just changed channels....and I'm still reading!
puresoulandfreshink Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
damn it!
AutumnAxis Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
this is a masterpiece of graphic and literary genius. All errors aside, I'm absolutely captivated by Ally's vulnerability. What's more is that you hit the nail on the head with the tendencies of Doms and subs. No one really likes to admit it or talk about it, but when you get right down to it; that's pretty much exactly why we do what we do.

After the second page in chapter one, I was hooked on this story. You turned a fantasy "jerk-off" session into a full blown well written story. At that point I knew this guy was smart, now I see you're a genius.

And I don't throw that word around lightly.
knothead411 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Hot drawings, really sad you got the whole D/s BDSM thing needing "issues and abuse as a background" wrong like everyone else.
AutumnAxis Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
I respectfully disagree; he didn't get it wrong. Although it may not be true for 100% of the population who indulge in BDSM, it certainly accounts for the vast majority of the population. Many other factors come into play sure, rearing, religion, environment, the media, but deep down he got it right.
BDSM and sex tap into parts of our brain that light us up like a Christmas tree. It's not physical, its all psychological, and it all comes from somewhere.
docheartache Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Dude, did you even bother reading the fucking thing? It says quite clearly that being a domme isn't a way for Ally to compensate for a past trauma.
PookaWitch Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooo, the digital painting in the middle of this strip is gorgeous!
Miryouno Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Gosh reading this makes me sick with the anticipation and emotion going on in this seen. You're such a jerk being awesome at this comic!!!!
247wkman Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
what the smiley said[link]
Centaurfun Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
hehe... this is why I wait a few weeks... and then there's this big pile of 'em so I don't have to wait... well...'til I get to the last one and I gotta wait again :-D

Yep, even the hottest and biggest of Dom/mes carry that tiny gut-wrenching fear of something from their past. Especially sometimes, when things are going so fabulously well, that you're terrified that what you did back when will come back to haunt you and take all your current happiness away.
auikimaya Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
:iconfreezaplz::iconsaysplz:OH, C'MON! THIS IS TAKING WAY TOO LONG!
:iconsongokuplz::iconsaysplz: SRSLY!
Squaloris Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lady-Gypsy Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
You Sirruh are just plain cruel dragging it out.... it's soooo good! ;P
blackdragonflower Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Kudos for your reference sir. Kudos
spikedpsycho Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Cruela Deville, Cruela Deville, if she doesn't tie you, no other domanatrix will.
LadyBloodShine Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
XD Really, Okay this aint no average dragonball fight, this is a supersayan smack down fight length. But always so worth it.
sarandib Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
AAAHHH! The cliff hangers!!!! x_x
BlackFlowerChild Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Isegovis2 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
To shiniez by this time two dragonballs would been found. good work
SirHobo88 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Loved the specially animated scene where Ally's holding Cruella down
ailati90 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Can't wait for the next page! :P Fantastic work on these :D
Clockchair Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
I'm ashamed of you... I saw the title and expected there to be a pun somewhere in the page
but noooo just heavy stuff that makes the characters deeper and more relate able
Atsuyojuunfuyumi Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
While I am greatly enjoying this, for some reason, my mind continues to come up with some of the most RIDICULOUS things that could have happened.

Like Marion getting terribly drunk and trying to do some bondage on herself.... but instead getting super tangled in a huge pile of rope and.... looking like a kitten, helpless in a pile of yarn, and that being her ultimate end, booze still in hand. I keep giggling. I know its a morbid topic, but.... my mind can take nothing seriously. XD

Wonderful comic, as always. I adore your stuff. <3
purpleumpa10 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
What must we do for more frequent updates? Beg? I can beg if need be. Pout maybe? Dance on the kitchen table in our panties? Write English essays? History essays? Build something the weight and size of myself out of toothpicks? What? Anything anything at all, and I'll do it! unless it's be patient. *sighs* I can't do the patience....
kylekenefick Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
but the conversation is far more intriguing and thoughtful than any dragonball fight.
mrdrkj Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i was thinking about which part of the page to comment ...and then i saw the 'longer than your average dragonball fight'...mwahahahaha, hilarious
tspike7 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
I found your work just yesterday and I absolutely love it. I'm new to bdsm and you truly show the side that most vanilla couples don't see, myself included. It is so much more intimate now that I understand that. Thank you
wulphe Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lucky4u Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
awwww come on! I WANT TO KNOW!!! >:(
Knochen0 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
I klicked at the previous button like 40 times...... I really want to know what happened!!!
Dude, you are a master of your work!!!!
Thanks for all that.
Mixd-Treats Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Goosebumps. An assault of goosebumps -right at "Kneel for me."

The scene can be felt 150% at just that line and image. Bloody brilliant.
jay2468 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
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