The dialogue is legitimately snappy and organic. Kudos. Though, it's a little confusing erotically speaking. I don't know many people who'd just shuffle a hojo request in the middle of a conversation. That, to me, feels dissonant with the sentimental staccato: which seems to be insecurity played against wry concern.
Other than that it's actually fairly engaging. Still, it's a complicated and strange scenario given it's a comic series about a dominatrix.