Alan, you try so hard~
Makes me think of The Room xD. How hasn't there been any The Room jokes yet, I just realized I feel lacking!
Love your strip, man!
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have more Lisa and Ally to read!
... DO I want that a a yearbook quote?
It's little touches like that which show the difference between a good artist and a great one. Nicely done Shiniez.
And I have to say, was I the only one who noticed the sofa change colour half way through?
The dialogue is legitimately snappy and organic. Kudos. Though, it's a little confusing erotically speaking. I don't know many people who'd just shuffle a hojo request in the middle of a conversation. That, to me, feels dissonant with the sentimental staccato: which seems to be insecurity played against wry concern.
Other than that it's actually fairly engaging. Still, it's a complicated and strange scenario given it's a comic series about a dominatrix.
IŽll get that on a Shirt for the next Metal-Festival I go to....
Absolute Awesome Story and Art....