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(Contains: sexual themes)
next one is the end to chapter 2... i'm saying nothing more but....abandon your expectations :)
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:iconbriskenzu:
Briskenzu Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wouldnt long nails be.... well in the bedroom....

Since its 2 girls.... 
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GeekySica Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
You learn to work around it <3
 
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Grey-Wolf1 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Student Filmographer
That look Ally made when Cassie came in :) Okay...I have never drooled when reading before but my shirt seems to bed the difference right about now...wasn't alot of drool enough for me to calm myself down! This story is AMAZING! The character development is going at a great speed. As well as story progression. :retarded-drool: 
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Sinclair-milo Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Is it me or did they over dramatize the whole ally maron story. the whole thing is maron's damn fault
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:iconnevir-saedi:
Nevir-Saedi Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
Guilt is not logical. What happens is almost irrelevant, ultimately everything is perception. For whatever reason she decided she was the root of it all. The fact that the bad stuff was 100 degrees of separation away didn't matter to her.
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Sinclair-milo Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
not the author I mean the gang in the club.
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miniquinn Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh no i'm developing a huge and painful crush on ally
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:iconmagicv:
MagicV Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
unfunfunfunfhella
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N30NGH0ST Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
Very nice!
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ArchangelMemnoch Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Um,uh yeah,uh funny thing, when I was kid, my neighbor had a pet cougar. One day I jumped there fence as a short cut to the store and jumped down face to face with that cougar. Now, normally it would be cool, as the cat knew me and didnt bother me, but I landed right by his dish as he was eating, and the look he gave me was the same look Ally gave. Makes me feel the same,too. I think I need my blankie now.
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KleinerKiller Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Seriously, get this into a fucking movie deal or something. Best love story I've ever read.
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URHimeXan Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
the faaace loves it oh allly i'd be your sub any day~
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TacoNewman Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They are too hot to handle!
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neehko Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful! And such a fitting title! Excellent job!!
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ShadowsideArtemis Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
please....don't yell out the safeword yet!!! (btw...very nice safeword :3)
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yuetchi Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
o.O ally looks like a vampire when the other girl walks in on them
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mrdrkj Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
stop it...?
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dreylord Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
panel 8 !best panel!
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dreylord Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
sry all panels best panel
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JCStormbringer Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
into bondage and yes this is awesome.
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:iconknotfever:
Knotfever Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Is it hot in here, or is it just me? hubba, hubba...

Damn you, siniez!
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:iconb0th:
B0th Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Hot and Philosophical! Love it! (as always)
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:iconfanartfantast:
FanArtFantast Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
My expectations are more great art and wonderfull story in many chapters to come... Please donīt make me abandone those!!
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Darushka Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
FUCK YEAHHHHHHHHHH this strip was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee
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:iconcoyotey:
Coyotey Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
DANGER DRUNK DOMME!
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Von-Krupp Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Hot scenes and whether or not one is into the topic aside, the story is rather fascinating. Well-written; lots of typos, but they are somewhat endearing.
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LinkFox101113 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Sunstone!
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WolfGoddess1824 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student General Artist
I leave my expectations to you then and await visual heaven! >3
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CheshireGrrrl Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hmmm that shoulder bite
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:iconimcoolright:
imcoolright Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
The lip biting completely hooked me.

Can't wait to see how this concludes. :)
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Talvez97 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
love this story, hope there is a chapter 3
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Ryvienna Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
...there's gonna be blood EVERYWHERE. >_<
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reptile8373 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
chapter 2 is almost over? Does this mean Anne will finally show up soon?
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Odisseous Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
love it always do
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sure2gal Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Gah! The Look on her face on the last panel is priceless! :dance:
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Peep1317 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
....Heeeehhhh :blush:~:heart:
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Mass-Accelorator Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah I don't know what Cassie was expecting to see in a VIP bathroom of an S/M club... Hasn't she been keeping up with the series?:picknose: Honestly! :disbelief: Well done as always... :w00t:
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The---New---Cancer Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
uuuugh... I can't wait :(
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Amaze-Balls Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...i just hope everyone washes their hands when they leave :iconseriouslyplz:
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JustHally Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
"The rabbit goes over the log, underthe grass, around the flower and then through the tunnel" FUCKING EPIC! couldn't but laugh laugh laugh! xD

this story is such a great one!
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moxiee Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Does Lisa try to stay away from Ally when she's drinking or does she use it to her advantage?
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Scorpion1813 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I learnt long ago never to expect anything other than awesome stories, character development, and expression of emotion in your characters.

OK, maybe I'm expecting a lot, but I'm never disappointed every time I see a Shiniez update.
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wingsofveritas Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Your work is exceptional as always!!
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wingsofveritas Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
brilliant!!!
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Trarilin Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
oooh the way you made her eyes look so fierce and angry when interrupted, so perfect omg, i had shivers
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dakingzmen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
okay they better not break up, or else! btw shiniez is the biggest tease ever
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WickedAngel79 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I adore the freckles. :)
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LordSantiago Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
great story, i love the facial expressions and emotions conveyed...plus, all the stuff that's implied is a great way to pique attention without crossing boundaries. always a (guilty) pleasure reading this
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JaylaClark Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Abandoning them... this was amazing. ... I mean... lemme go choose the appropriate icon...

There. I may really be sweating. I'm not gonna predict the end of chapter two at ALL, I'm too distracted.
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Tomomaru Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
I absolutely love your writing shiniez.

As for my guess, I'm gonna go with either:
A: one of them throws up from the booze, killing the mood
B:Ally breaks it off, since this was proving lisa wouldn't say no when the time came
C: hot steamy sex(my personal favourite
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