also, I dont mind the typos. something about the way they come off actually makes them seem strangely appropriate. almost like they are talking with an accent. a couple panels back ally sounded almost russian XD
I think the only downside of this story is that social strictures pretty much prevent me from sharing this with any of my friends. But it's so damn cute! It's not fair that a story like this, ironically about guilty pleasures, has to be a guilty pleasure unto itself. Mneh. Oh, btw, thanks for staying relatively distant from the painful-looking bdsm stuff. I love the romance here, but I couldn't stand seeing either of these two in pain.