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and no not this comic , not yet, title refers to the first weekend only XD

now, imma use my psychic powers to deduce someone will mention some typos or bad grammar....aaand go!
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hammerade Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
To help proofread out typos, you should get a cunning linguist.
Parthos95 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Photographer
most underrated comment ever
Nyph-Atzbel Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm your fan!
This! THIS! *cries*
Observaty Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015
Guy Gavriel Kay? She's got good taste!
AngeliqueRaven Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
so sweet *------*
EllaPress Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Student General Artist
I'm in love!
0mniessence Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
"my" <3
bjezerey Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
When I read this I was so delighted to see Tigana on Lisa's dresser. I've been enjoying the story so much, but that just made my day.
RoyceGrey Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
Poor Ally.
flamewolf393 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
wow. major downer. man...

also, I dont mind the typos. something about the way they come off actually makes them seem strangely appropriate. almost like they are talking with an accent. a couple panels back ally sounded almost russian XD
deathbacon Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
I'd love to know how you created that effect with Ally's couch. It looks almost like flames, or leaves, or some combination of the two. 
Swoopmott Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I get the last few panels a lot. It's kinda how I felt when I spent a night alone after being with my ex for so long
FlyingRagePanda Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If anyone looks at this precious story and even cares about grammar, I shall sit on them and panda-squish the fail out of them.

Anyways, OMGOMGOMGOMG!!! I love this so hard. :3

Big hugs for Ally too. I know those feels. :(
SirMandokarla Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I think the only downside of this story is that social strictures pretty much prevent me from sharing this with any of my friends. But it's so damn cute! It's not fair that a story like this, ironically about guilty pleasures, has to be a guilty pleasure unto itself. Mneh. :P Oh, btw, thanks for staying relatively distant from the painful-looking bdsm stuff. I love the romance here, but I couldn't stand seeing either of these two in pain.
Adryanka Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
oh my,i get you so well))) I'll try getting a completly hetero friend of mine into this :D she was pro bdsm though, so I'll try using it as teaching material :D :D :D
Togekaboom Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
That's what Tumblr was invented for. ;3
pittbull44 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
MadameCrosse Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Professional Writer
Ugh~ a WHOLE week, ahead....

Those changes from pink to black just sucks & that Im a lover of Black & Leather. pffff.
dt7cz3gj Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Ugh, this is perfect.
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconmuricaplz::iconsayingplz:LEARN TOO SPELL TERRORIST
shiniez Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
i al laughing my ass off over here XD "too" was a nice touch XD
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Student Filmographer
You got the joke :iconloolplz: that's every murican in a nutshell
klfrederick Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
What a great way to introduce the idea of Drop !!! kudos for this
LeraDraco69 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so attached to these girls now. Even Alan too. I feel so bad for Ally being alone and all. Not cool. I just want the two of them to be happy! I never thought I'd hear myself asking for less emotional wreckage, and more happy stuff!!!
Agent-Sloth Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
holy hell, the panels with the background disappearing...@_@ so awesome!
YG-Draug Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Professional Writer
This shit is so good, makes me all fuzzy on the inside. :)
CrazySOB42 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student General Artist
The grammar and spelling suck, but I've definitely read worse.
WhiteCrowMoon Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I don't mind the grammar errors as they help the text fit
RookBartly2 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I just ignore the 'grammar' because people seem not to use correct grammar when they talk to friends anyone.
Soul-Daemon Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yep thas luv
Twilight16Master Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this part always leaves me so sad for Ally....
Joeltes-V Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish I'd stumbled on this sooner. Ya, this strip is titillating. But it's also very honest, honestly hilarious, and very relatable. I love that everybody has absolutely the right things they wanna say in their heads, but something bad happens between the thought process and the moment their lips form the words. When Alan said, "I should've gone with, 'Need a hand?'" I nearly fell off my chair. Can't wait to read the rest. :D
BoundBiLove Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
OMG. This is the perfect way for me to introduce my SO to the kink! You describe the feelings so perfectly!
DanDrako Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
I came looking for porn. I found heart.
It's true what they say: What's bad for the boner is good for the soul
SanityZero Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
I read the typos as actual words or what they were meant to be
MorriganSteel Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
i see them but i dont really pay attention to any typos and stuff cause I am really into the story. Great job as always
TheFishSlappee Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just read through this first chapter and MAN are you talented. Well done, I did enjoy this an unhealthy amount ^^
GomezAddams Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I already mentioned -- those things -- once, so I won't. Instead, I wanted to compliment you on your characters, and that you're emphasizing the love story and not just the sex. :)
SindooraBelialle Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
I am in loveeeeee with Ally. She is so adorable! I just wanna... ahem... never mind ;)
jay357 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the loneliness-feeling you get when seeing ally sitting there... just breathtaking!
TechnicolourBiscuit Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
Not sure why, but batlesbo got your comment, so just wanted to let you know how much I love the way the wallpaper disintegrates into white space around her. Brilliant move
TechnicolourBiscuit Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
The disintegration of the wallpaper to white space was a brilliant move
delusionalgreenbean Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
The fade to white is lovely, very well conceptualized. Hats off to anyone who can make a thoroughly sexy yet artfully thoughtful story!
Knotfever Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
I don't figure these two out. They've got what I never had my whole life and after only three days they're depressed? wtf? Oh, that's real.
delusionalgreenbean Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
They don't seem depressed to me. Love's a rollercoaster, and with those sorts of emotional highs, you are going to get some lows too. At a great party, I'll usually have a few minutes where I'm bummed as all hell and just want to be alone. And then I go back to dancing. So yes, confusion and complex emotions are quite real, and very well portrayed. So keep your personal issues out of your responses to the author.
Knotfever Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Down boy! Down! Stop humping the author's leg for a minute and listen up. :lmao:

They don't seem depressed to you? Did you read the same strip as everyone else? The last three panels show Lisa and Ally both sighing, faces dreary. Before that Ally thinking to herself "House feels bigger somehow." And you don't think they're depressed? Good thing you're no psychiatrist. Those 'lows' you mentioned are exactly what I said they were, states of depression. I should know, being one suffering from the condition for many years.

Your 'party' comparison is flatly ridiculous. You state wanting to be alone for a few minutes and then going back to dancing? These two women have had a very intense weekend and now are understandably coming down off that huge high, which in this manner is correctly shown by the author as the two laying down and sighing for long periods of time, gestures correctly portrayed by depression. When I feel the same way I curl up in a fetal position or just lay down as they are shown doing. I certainly would not blame them for feeling cut off from a part of a relationship that has burned so brightly for them in the brief time it was spent. It may not last for very long, depending on their personalities, but it IS a state of depression they're in.

And by the way, I'll write what I think I should write, without any apologies to our esteemed author and certainly not someone as ignorant to what real depression is such as yourself, thank you very much. I hate to break this to you, but you're not in charge here. :evillaugh:
ahrimahn Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Oh and on reading the next panel, its definitely loneliness.
ahrimahn Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
What the hell where you reading they dont look sad in that pannel, they look like they're tired out (which is a pretty easy inference to make, they did just spend two days getting less than optimal sleep). It should also be noted that these are two people who before this where both fairly lonely and kind of unhappy and in the last two days they have just had some very enjoyable marathon sex and doing other enjoyable things, of course they're going to be lonely afterwards. Its reaching to say they're depressed when its easier to interperet as simply going back to normal after a few days really enjoying themselves.

(please dont pull the "you just dont understand depression" card, I actually have depression and I can definately say this seems fairly unlike depression and very like exhaustion and lonelyness)
Knotfever Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
*rolls eyes, shakes head ruefully* They have eyes, but they cannot see.

You really, truly don't think that loneliness and depression can walk hand in hand? Despite clinical studies to the contrary? Not all lonely people are depressed, nor are all depressed people lonely, but the 2 conditions share significant variance in many of the studies that have measured them both. I think I've been reading the only strip on this page. I don't know what you've been reading, but what is there I think is rather obvious. Uninterrupted sighing is MORE than just being lonely. It is two people reacting to being without each other. THAT is depression. Being by themselves is loneliness, far from what they are feeling now.

I never pulled any 'depression card', I unfortunately have the monster within me and I'm sorry if you actually have it yourself. But to say 'I can definately say this seems fairly unlike depression and very like exhaustion and lonelyness' is meaningless without showing some proof of being a psychotherapist. Hell, you can't even spell 'definitely' or 'loneliness' properly, so I doubt very seriously you are. So much for your credentials. What we have is two opinions on a single subject, nothing more, nothing less. And if you don't like my opinion, well, no biggie. Just don't infer that yours is the only opinion that is the right one.
ahrimahn Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Not to say they are entirely different conditions, I just think you're making a bit of a mountain out of a molehill here and given how this seems to not be the case anywhere else I'd be willing to bank on loneliness simply because they don't seem to act like it again.

On a side note how does my poor spelling ability reflect whether or not I have depression?
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