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aaah misplaced guilt...wait for that one...
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:icontiffanyiscool:
Tiffanyiscool Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015
The Feels!
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:iconjohnyboy19d:
johnyboy19D Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015
This is hitting me right in the feels.
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:iconirishrose101:
Irishrose101 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Student General Artist
um... did lisa's dress strap switch shoulders?
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:iconlordgor:
LordGor Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
No, it's still on her left shoulder, as you kann see in the 4th panel.
In the other panels we observ her and Ally in the mirror, therfore we can see both their faces, even though they face eachother
Bye the way: a nice trick, shiniez! totally tard
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:iconbinkakitty:
BinkaKitty Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
booo, get a dungeon!  XD  love it!!!
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:iconfreefallhero:
FreeFallHero Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Boooooo. Get a dungeon" made my day.
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:iconsebaselciclon:
sebaselciclon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She just grabs the concept of "overthinker" and takes it to a whole new level. It would make me feel sorry for her if I wasnt the same way.
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:iconbatmangenesis:
BatmanGenesis Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
I suppose one of the lessons offered here is "Never judge a book by its cover"? Your story is engaging, and addicting. Makes me more aware that there is always some complexity behind fetishes of all kinds. I love your art style, too. Look forward to reading/viewing more.
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:iconcheetahamsloth:
CheetaHamSloth Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Hell this comic will make me cry...
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:iconmagnusot:
magnusot Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Hey, this panel did make me cry. And I'm a straight guy!
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:iconmrdrkj:
mrdrkj Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i can't decide between 'teasing dickishness' and 'boo, get a dungeon!'....great, great as always
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:iconshiro31:
Shiro31 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
"Boo, get a dungeon!" Just great.
(Of course the story's great too *g* )
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:icontrarilin:
Trarilin Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
*flails* omg omg! lisa would never leave ya ally...i mean i know we know that...but ah!
so awesome and good! cant wait to see more!
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:iconkeybladeroxas:
KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
... Teeeeell whaaaaaaat haaaaappened! Ohmygodyougetmeallwrappedupinsuspenseandthenyoustop!! Evil, wonderful, amazing man of GRRRRRR.
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:iconbuttercrump:
buttercrump Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
Hugging! Where is the hugging! :(
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:iconbillygoat654:
billygoat654 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
"get a dungeon" :XD: epic line
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:icondoyoulikewafflesyeh:
doyoulikewafflesyeh Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
Gah! the cliff hanger! *needs more* *~* + aww dont cry ally, it'll turn out great!
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:icontriforcewarrior:
TriforceWarrior Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
poor thing...
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:iconcheshiregrrrl:
CheshireGrrrl Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
NO! -claws the screen, wanting more-
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:iconrachelaurami:
rachelaurami Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
grr to cliffhangers, get to the sad part already
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:iconsleep3walker:
sleep3walker Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
when the next strip is coming up , I need to know what happened or I wont sleep for cople of days .... oh wait ...
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:iconremusmdh:
Remusmdh Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, what a place to leave off at x.x Thank the gods of chaos D3 died off >_>

Lovely working up to that misplaced guilt <3
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:iconisiusmaiko:
IsiusMaiko Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you ever make these into a physical comic, I will buy them right away *_*
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:iconempty-hand:
Empty-Hand Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
I'm so gonna use that 'Go get a dungeon' phrase when I see my mate next. His domme will flip!! :)
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:iconjakebondage:
JakeBondage Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Professional Writer
riveting, as always
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:iconpatricktricks:
patricktricks Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
so
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:iconmistresseli:
MistressEli Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
God I love this story! I'm so happy to have ever found you and your awesome works! Bravo......Bravoooooo!
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:iconwillock7:
willock7 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Excellent played suspense for the next comic which I definitely will see. Really great plot and storyline that remind me of the realistic and believable characters you have created. I think everyone can relate to having one of those fuck ups with relationships.
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:icontikani-kat:
Tikani-Kat Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Right in the feels.
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:iconvaleryonfire:
valeryonfire Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
awwh, can't wait
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:icondangerous101:
dangerous101 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
wow, Marion in the 7/8 panels reminded me of Lisa in [link]

I guess Alan got to know how to deal with that situation a lot better than Ally did.

Amazing stuff, and I had a slight theory that it was going to be Ally somehow getting too close to Marion and breaking Alan and Marion up, but wasn't quite sure on the details. Looking forward to seeing the future flashbacks... err yeah...
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dangerous101 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
me failing at links...
[link]
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:iconskyesfury:
skyesfury Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
That last panel with Ally crying... That's the things that make your art and storytelling so awesome. Your characters are human, not just "characters in a story".
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:iconaonon:
Aonon Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Loving the story flow and character development.
And I would speculate upon how I think Ally fucked up their friendship, but I know that shiniez has a double-barreled anti-random-theory shotgun with my name on it.
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:iconshiniez:
shiniez Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
cha-tchk go ahead, make my day!
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:iconaonon:
Aonon Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
No thanks. I'm not sure what it might be yet, and besides, I WANT TO LIIIIIIVE!!
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:iconlordbhathory:
LordBhathory Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
And it keeps getting better and better
kinda hard not to get addicted
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:iconshard1k:
Shard1k Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Hard not to get addicted? It is impossible! =D
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:iconemeraldknight74:
EmeraldKnight74 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
You must be a Dom in RL...only a Dom would like the tease and denial strategy as much as you do (not to mention have such impeccable timing...)keep going! No safeword yet!
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:iconins0m:
INS0M Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
y must u mess with us like this!!!! the story must go on!!! gerrrrrrr
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:iconknotfever:
Knotfever Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Ally and I have another thing in common. We *ef up our relationships...
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:iconcutiedeanna94:
cutiedeanna94 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
MOAR!!!!!!!! *wants to find a way to jump to the future*
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:iconlunjanie:
lunjanie Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Aaaaagh!! Can't wait for the next xD. Oh wait! I can, but don't want to !!! lol :3
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:iconsamycat0072:
samycat0072 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
poor ally, also you manage to make lisa look really evil sometimes :D
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:iconatsuyojuunfuyumi:
Atsuyojuunfuyumi Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
This story is fantastic. Positively fantastic. And your art style is beautiful! And your girls are beautiful and... afhaldhalk!

I'd love to do some fan art of them, if that's alright with you. All credit will be given, of course.
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:iconf0x7713:
F0X7713 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Amazing as always!!!! =')
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:iconseantied:
seantied Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
As always, your art/comic/strip what ever you wish to call it is heartfelt, funny, amusing and thought provoking. Sounds like Ally thinks she always messes up her relationships, and blames herself to much therefore creating a self fullfilling prophecy.
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:iconghostwalkerjay:
GhostwalkerJAY Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
"Boo! Get a Dungeon!"

... Imma have to sue you now. You just made me spill my coffee all over myself and my desktop while laughing uncontrollably. :D
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:iconcaffeinefiend11:
Caffeinefiend11 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
To be continued! D=
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:iconcatykins:
Catykins Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Nooo, I don't wanna wait! T^T No Ally don't cry!
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