Hmm. Hadn't noticed on prior reading: geometry's wrong in the last panel. The speech balloons are wrongly placed left-to-right. Looking at the puzzle from their perspective, as the panel would seem to be showing, left-to-right would be Lisa-Ally, not Ally-Lisa.
a question tho, do you have some suggestions on how to make a map? i am designing a game that needs quite a big map but all i can do is make a flat layout without even a sense of "this is a map", it's more something like "you'll find it after your stomach is emptied out"