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ah yes, anne underestimated severely the crippling power of the nervous excitement, she came to ally planning to trade off some control for some ... stress release

but rational planning and actual situations results can differ greatly

also this one im trying a new font as per suggestion, imma try a few suggested fonts these days and then have a bit of a vote, before i switch all the previous pages texts to the decided font
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dinoking007 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016
That last panel has the infamous rape face moment that everyone should be familiar with
naruto392 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015
Absolutely incredible 
Darklarik Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! 
welcometothedarksyde Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Where are these in your gallery, I can't find them
Remusmdh Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I had completely forgotten this page. I loved this sequence, but somehow, forgot this page. That count down... Not only table-top like, but also, "of your own free will and if you panic, you still have time to run". DAAAAAAMN, how did I miss this? *squees* Lovely <333
Quinlan73 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Oh wow Ally's expression in the last panel is the definition of predatory!
MidnightMusik14 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
i like the old font better.
247wkman Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
i must be firing ma layzoor cause my face just beamed
thesadistqc Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really love that evil grin that alli has in the last panel :3 adorable !
SirHobo88 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Loved the padlock locking the lines together.
therienke Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
I... I think I need a moment.
LolitaLaTex Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
synthbeats Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
Kinda enjoying this, maybe you could use this font when someone in the strip gets antsy or nervous, even excited. and use the original during regular dialogue. It adds a subtle reaffirmation to the context when its used in areas like the second and third panel.

Just a thought.
twinkletoes40 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
so much love for ally!:love:
DreamingxAshley Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anne's bright red face is so cute. <3
doormatlizardess Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
Very hot scene <3
RecklessRoges Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012
I like the new font. Some of the words seem to concatenate, but I don't know if that is by artistic design, (i.e. there isn't enough space) or accidental. Would you like help editing/proof reading?
DarthSparrow Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
Great =D
Ra-kun Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012
I've been away for 3 days
this last part of the strip has made my week o_0
this was so... indescribably.... intense Alison is sooooo aaawesome :D
(and Lisa sure is quite curious, that's quite the pair Alison got there :D)
nahp75 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012
Tom and Jerry... in 2012! :D
3Dcaptor Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012
Excellent. Love the build of anticipation.
CodyGat Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait to buy the graphic novel.
docman001 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
At the risk of sounding repetitive----wow. Just the art itself is masterful, easily professional quality, you could be doing graphic novels (of which, dare I say, I am a connoisseur) if you wanted....because the other half of the coin is that you are a terrific storyteller. I look forward to each installment, not just for the eroticism, but because of what you've done with the characters. You mentioned that English is not your first language, but you have been able to capture the relationships between the characters perfectly in both dialog and expressions. Well done, sir.
billygoat654 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Crimsonberry Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really like the new font. It is a bit easier to read and I think it has more depth to it. :)

Also...very very sexy Ally in this page, I can feel my own heart kinda pounding in anticipation. :heart:
senchou-senchou Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
T-dog60 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
damn it I love these characters. and ally's face at the end made me shiver a bit, very nice
Tienz113 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
The tongue... and her teeth.
KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
.... I swooned. Also, loving the new font.

Oh... and... goddess above, you are the best BDSM comic writer/artist I know of. And if I actually find one better, I might die.
classicfan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lovely page, never a dull moment with these two ;)
Not too fond of the font though - something little thicker and simpler would be easier to read, methinks.
rahf224 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
I just love the expression on Ally's face in the last panel.
Chambersnake Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
We ARE going to see what happened next, right?
ZenarrausJ7 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god that last panel, this whole thing, oh hnnng :iconcannotevenplz:
jaket73 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
So are we, Allison, So are we.

I want to be Ally when I grow up!
llywrch Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
I'm not finding the new font an improvement over the old one. But my favorite font for cartoons of all time was the one used in "Thor" many, many years ago during Walt Simonson's tenure, when he produced the memorable Ragnarok saga. (I don't remember the name of who did the letttering, & my copies are boxed away at home.)

The worst? The typewriter letters used in "Mad" magazine. Just shows that lettering doesn't hurt a fine product -- although it can strengthen one. Just my thoughts.
llywrch Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Now that I had the chance to find my old "Thor" comics, I found who did the lettering: John Workman Jr. I believe he also did the lettering in the early "GrimJack" comics.
Duuz-Diz-Din Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
And what happened then? Well, in Whoville they say that my baggy pants tightened by three sizes that day.
Baconmoose Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
That font is MUCH better, man. I'm interested to see the other choices but it's already a massive improvement. It compliments your stylistically uneven line work really well. I know some people don't like it as much though, so maybe they'll dig some of the other ones.
Hinaloth Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
I soooo can see her in catgirl outfit...
skyesfury Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Not a fan of this font, but I could get used to it. It feels a bit intrusive on the eyes since it's a little jagged in nature. Still, favoring the larger portion of your fans on something minor isn't a bad thing (like which font to use).
MarleneB Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Ally is a Domme after My own perverted little heart. I can't begin to tell you how many times even in Second Life that I have people come and kneel unbidden at My feet, or I approach them, and as I weave My spell, they eventually kneel and ask if I would take them on.
oldcarnutxke Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Tell the Font/spelling/grammar/continuity/reality nazis to shove off.
they have nowhere else to go,
I still want to see the harness from last week!!!
Baconmoose Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Are you implying that someone who favors improvement on font, spelling, grammar, continuity, and believability(reality), are nazis? XD That's a little too liberal, don't you think?

I think the 'anti improvement' nazis really need to shove off, personally. XP
Skytower Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Nice framing on the last pannel.
lunalycan71 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Professional Artist
lol, I love it!
sabinaBondage Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Love her expression in the last panel!
fiddlestiks Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Student General Artist
i don't like this font... but the PAGE holy SHIT
terrifying O_O
ElysianImagery Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
SQUEEEEEEE! I think I would just about die from a mini heart attack of excitement if I were in that situation. Me? Living vicariously through these wonderful comics? Oo.... I have no idea what you are talking about >.>

btw, the little freckle on her cheek, does it continue to move or are those suppose to be dimples?
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