My God...this is not only well paced, well scripted and well drawn but it's friggin hot without any over the top super explicit sex scenes. I've already finished the 2nd chapter can can't wait to read the 3rd.
I especially love how you keep everything in a rough to mid level rendered style for the panels but then make impactful or emotional scenes (like the VIP bathroom) fully rendered.
First off... wow! Hmm... okay, too many things to start off with something like "first off." Let me try again. You artwork is gorgeous. Your storytelling is just... profound. Like magic. I mean, yeah, visualizations help to make it more like a movie in your head, but there are movies and then actually experiencing it while you're reading it. Needless to say, I was kind of sobbing there at the end with Ally telling that story. Title of the story is also kind of making me weepy at the moment, too (no need to guess why). Still... yeah... I don't really even know. Profound on so many levels. I did especially love the very, very ending. Like a breath of fresh air. >.< (Corny much? Gah!) Haha. Anyway... awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome. So much awesomeness. Yet another chapter I'm utterly in love with.