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(Contains: nudity and sexual themes)
chapter 1 of sunstone in a pdf format, must admit really reads nicely on one of them ipad type tablet things

just hit download on the right for all you who arent used to it :)
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ghastly20 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When I first saw some images of this comic on another site I thought cool, then I began to read them and well the story just grabbed hold of me and never let me go..  I have read many comics in my life and none of them have held my interest for long and have been forgotten about..  But your story is just magnificent a story where you can relate to the characters and follow their everyday lives, their highs and their lows, this story is fantastic and can't wait to see what comes in chapter 5.. Thank you so much for all this and your awesome generosity in posting it here.. :)
nerveZero Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
You are such a generous dude. Thanks so much!!.

I don't know if karma exists, but I hope it does so that fairy rainbow kittens rain down from the sky for you clutching money and good chocolate in their paws. Then they get rid of all the random pests around your place, and then they hide in the daytime and come out at night and do all the cleaning and they don't need feeding because you deserve their attention.
Jacquibrace68 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
YES YES YES :powerwoot: the best author:booyah:  since Robert A Heinlein
Phoneix-Faerie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing work :) i look forwards to buying it when it comes out
majinkajisan Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Did you know the Platypus has 10 sex chromosomes??
...I'm sure Al got to that at some point, right?
freya12 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
I can't download it. whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Waaaah! 
Inversioned Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
I had some trouble, too. There's something with DeviantArt's site. It will download, but it takes a loooooooong time for some reason. Hang in there.
Nonosama Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Filmographer
omg....... reading sunstone in the train? HELL YEAH! XD 
VampirateLycan Featured By Owner May 12, 2014
Where can I buy these?
Ivankain Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
And many thanks for this pdf recollection!
Btw, is it me or the pictures are loosing a bit of quality in the pdf conversion °_°?
LoneWolf69sg Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
beautiful...  I originally came across this on some porn site link and thought I was gona jack of to it, but within the first few pages and I was so into the story, I completely lost focus on what I was there originally for...  :P

Please do continue it, don't stop. I so want to know how it all finally comes together. Keep up the AWESOME job! a 10/10 in my book, and if you are ever in the area, let me know, I will buy you coffee!  ^^
Brenzpa Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
FlyingRagePanda Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! Thanks for the PDFness! <33333
Twyss Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Thank you for your work.
pokies Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
ugh i love it so much ; n;
silvikun Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Amazing >w< love it!!!!
Krashdown22 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
This is fantastic! I love the main three. They work well as a trio. Though, looking at the two main girls, it seems like you took a bit of inspiration from Borderlands and Bayonetta for character modeling. I mean, how did the characters come about when you were creating this? 
DrClosure Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
I heard of this comic just today, randomly, and i read it in one strike. I really liked it! Congrats! :) Even if I'm totally not in BDSM, I loved the story and I can't wait to read more!
haleywah44 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
I love all of them..but Alan really is just fantastic.
VioletVelvet6 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Interface Designer
the sketching is amazing... and the story is really catchy... is awesome :D
krisalyx Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
i guess my only complaint @shiniez is when it comes to comics i'm used to reading them in .cbr format but anyways looks great, but boyhowdy was i taken aback bout it to be honest
SimoneSinister Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
In the 16th frame, there are two typograpical errors. "THEY SPENT HOURS UPON HOURS FILLING YOU IN...NOOT THAI I ASKED THEM..." should be "...NOT THAT I ASKED THEM...". Apart from that, it's been very good so far. Thanks!
jc-turbo Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Absolutely brilliant, I had to keep reading. Looking forward to reading chapter 2.
vegasbondage1 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Well I guess I am a Newbie . My My
How dose one read the entire story ? I am a black belt at Tumblr but this is all new to me.
PS I am in love
vegasbondage1 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Oh and I put like 4 links to your deveiantart
maxyoupi Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
wow, just discovered your comics. I've seen your art before in various forums, without any link to the deviantart page.
I'm stunned. This is just perfect.
ElleShaped Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.
SyntheticDarkness58 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can't wait to put this up on my Kindle so I can read it in my bath where no one will interupt.
ECOWARRIORX Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Sexy as hell, dude! Just reminded me yet again why I love your work!
Archaga Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
There are those rare moments when I stumble upon something new. Be it music, a show, a game, etc, that's completely different from what I've seen before or used to but incredibly awesome that it amazes me how easily I could've never known about it and so glad that I did found it. I'm only a few pages in but I can already tell I'll be enjoying this series. I see you already have quite a following but I wish you luck in any of your future endeavors and that your work's existence continues to be recognized.
rockarnaka Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome! downloading right now :D
aella Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Instantly in love with this!
jonnyrubberman Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
OMG talk about awesomely amazing. now if only real life was that easy finding someone you can truly be yourself with.

i can't wait to read what happens next
battle810 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
This is very well done. The art and story are great. I am a comic book collector and this better than some of the comics out there right now. It is very well written and the character act is great.
captnpower Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
ok this is just a wow factor here nice art, awesome story and i loved that last pannel... genius
necroa Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome story.
Kyuukitsuki Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Such a good read.
StrikeFreedom21 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Very well written and just an overall awesome story. Can't wait to see this in print.
SweetTama Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
what can i say ... if not seen it :D
DCcableguy Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
this is one of the sweetest love stories I have ver read, fantastic art work aswell, just beautiful
WolfPriestess5 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I completely love it!!! <3 <3
CharlesWS Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Hello, I'm also a (want to be professional) writer, and you just earned yourself a reader and fan, too! :)

To get this out of the way, I'm a dude. No, I'm not into BDSM. Yes, I am without a doubt into lesbian romance! (I even wrote a big "Mass Effect" FemShep-hearts-Liara fanfic you can find here in my gallery, "Coda", if you're ever interested!) If I was to give a reason why, there are actually many. But I guess the main reason I'm a straight guy into lesbians is because there's a beauty and tenderness to seeing two women in love that can't be found between a woman and a guy. It's hard to really put into words, it's just my 'thing'. You first got on my radar for your awesome Valentine's Day piece you have on DA with Ally and Lisa in the middle basically melting into each other! I finally got more time to investigate what you do here and find out who the heck Ally and Lisa are because my "Coda" is finally done. I locked onto your first chapter of "Sunstone" and...well, I'm hooked!

I don't know where you learned what you did in writing and art or if it all just comes naturally for you, but I can't help give you as much praise as you can carry! It's a warm, modern (and naturally, very very adult!) take on true romance...a story of two lonely women who find each other because they can give each other something they always wanted, but like the Rolling Stones sang, they might just find they'll get what they need, which is love! <3 But of course, being Human and as you say slightly insane, they can't see they're made for each other...yet...but this ride you're taking us on is amazing just out of the starting gate!

Again, I'm not into BDSM...the prospect of being a dom or submissive scares the crap out of me! On one hand, I'd be deathly afraid of hurting someone I'm dominating; on the other hand, I could never place myself so completely at the mercies of another. I'm just a safe, old-fashioned sex kind of guy, but I'd always be open to experimentation with whoever the lady is I hope and pray I'll meet one day and fall in love with. :) (I won't go into the laundry list of things I absolutely WON'T do, like 'golden this' and 'farm animal that'!) I've never thought of bondage as evil or anything, even though you'll find so many examples in the mainstream media that tell us those into BDSM are freaks. Hell, I've seen some shows both explain the psychology of bondage -- the submissive is the one who's truly in control of the experience, which I learned long ago -- and then call it abnormal. Lady Heather, anyone? It's like, we're constantly shown those who take bondage in one way or the other too damn far, and they're freaks because of it. The dom is a true sadist, and therefore dangerous, and all that. And the Internet's no damn road map, with all the adult stuff involving everything from chains and whips to...uh...machines, which I'm still trying to get out of my head! But you walk us through it in a way that helps us understand the roleplaying aspects of bondage, but you don't do it in a x-rated 'in your face' kind of way. When Ally and Lisa meet, they slowly and carefully tread toward their most intimate moments, and they're so gunshy at first about possibly messing things up. They're just two responsible adults walking into unknown territory, well aware of how to step back out of it just in case. You're showing us that BDSM is just sex between two souls who honestly care for each other's feelings and health, as it should be in sexual relations period!

I love Ally and Lisa, and that can't be said enough. The insanity they share with the rest of us aside, you created two truly deep and attractive characters for us to root for...I didn't expect how much more conservative and guarded Lisa was compared to Ally. And not having found someone to truly love yet, I can absolutely feel their mutual primal yearning to no longer be alone. Alan's cool, and I'd say I'd want to see more of him, but bah, let's keep focused on our lesbian lovebirds! Yes, I'm rooting for them to fall in love, and not just because they're hot together! Essentially I came for the hot lesbians, but I'm staying for this great romance you're crafting. And yes, it's a romance not just because they feel so alone when they're apart -- after everything they do to each other in their roleplay, something as simple as a deep and passionate kiss makes them go bananas! <3 So far this story is warm, sweet, and amazingly funny at turns, and I can't wait to see what's next! Thanks for giving us so much awesomeness!
Genicz Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Thats awesome! Thanks alot for that masterpiece! Itīs a very powerfull "comix" :-) full of energy, love, sex etc. etc. I feel emotions of it! Shiniez thanks alot, again.
Insatiaboo Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
This is some of the most awesome righting about BDSM, and what it means to try to develop (and find) a loving, healthy relationship based upon kink. Not to mention a fabulous primer on safe, sane and consexual. And it's really, really, really yummy. Thank you for the passion and effort!
Filly8 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.. you know i am honestly not really into BDSM all that much and have never read it. I am not even into lesbian works either haha but this was reccomended on another comic i was reading (about how males write lesbian stories and how females write gay stories) so i thought i'd give it a shot.

that all said; Wow! you sure know how to write a story! If you are not published in some way then you should be. Your style of writing is smooth and flowing but unique and the depth of your characters s just amzing no matter what the story is about! The plot itself is interesting int hat it is not exactly a common topic (at least that i've read) and i think you handled it very well :) Kudos to you!
CristophermoonB Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Amazing :D
skaterpunk2010 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh my mother of god!!!!!! your art work is amazing!!! I found myself drawn more to the story and what was being thought and said ^_^ I am a mega fan now lol and girl on girl action is never bad for anyone ;P hehe
Kyuukitsuki Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Greatest ever....
Jonpc042 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
This is amazing. I mean really, really good.

The artwork is refreshing, in exactly the way that graphics should be for a story like this. But far more satisfying for me, the characters are truly delightful, the story is uniquely charming, and the plot, deliciously tantalizing. I worry for how you will match chapter 1 in terms of intensity and satisfaction, and fully intend to love this series regardless.

On the whole, I would rank "Sunstone" as the sort of gem that justifies my sense of pride in the internet community, a pride often challenged by, for example, Youtube comments.

This is a true "diamond in the rough."

I very much look forward to reading the rest, and thank you very much, Shiniez, for expressing this rare piece of art, and even more for selflessly sharing it with the Deviant community.
shiniez Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist go read chapter 2 and 3 XD have fun :)
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